Missing U! Do Read It!

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#iR@

GANDI BACHI RELOADED
hello everyone! another poem from me... and this one is really close to my heart. just finished riting it and thought i could get a response from u guys. i thinks it's simple and the rest i want u guys to decide... it is long but please do read it and don't forget to comment... so here goes...

 MISSING U!

I miss the way u held me in the air
Pretending I could fly

I miss the way u got me candy
In the middle of the night

I miss the way u smiled at me
When everything went wrong

I miss the way u stood by me
Once the world thought I was wrong

I miss the way u made me laugh
When I was already so low

I miss the way u yelled at me
When u knew it was not my fault

I miss the way u messed with my guitar
Pretending u could play

I miss the way u were my audience
Before every major competition that laid

I miss the way u partied with ur friends
When u knew I’d be waiting to open the door when u came

I miss the way u yelled at me
Before helping me with maths

I miss the way u thought u would leave
One fine day

I miss the way u said “u won’t miss me”
Even though u had tears in ur eyes

I miss the way u waved at me
Before u set off for ur real life

I just hope u succeed in achieving
Every goal of ur life
Cause u r the one
I care for
From the deepness of my heart!


thanks A LOT for reading:) and now don't forget to comment! looking forward to them! any advice, any suggestion, any thoughts...don't hesitate just rite it down! :cool:
 
CrYpTiC_angel said:
for ur bro??

i quite liked it :) very sweet..
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m sure its for her bro....;-) ....................... nicely written dear ..... reps if allowed ....



d_ist_urb_ed said:
Why can every single person write such wonderful poems but me :mad:
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dude count me in also .... i cant write such stuff :o:
 
:nw: mujhe apna shishya bana lo :nw:

its awesome... :think:
 
@ cryptic.... yes it is for my bro! thanks for appreciating it gurl! oh and thanks for the reps too! :)

@ d_ist_urb_ed ..... uuummmm...... i am sure everyone can rite! thanks for reading though!

@ apurbajd... thanks a lot man! :) well... u should give it a try only then u can rite! hehe

@ maghuresh... thanks for the reps man! ;) really mean a lot!

@ born2tab... lol...Thanks a lot! :nw:

@ flyingbird... aawww... i exactly know wat u r going through... thanks for the comments!:)
 
Simply AWSOME.......................

Awsome thts the only word that comes in my mind every time i read it................
nice word slection and the secret is to keep it simple....

M-azing...u r not such gandi bachchi yaar afterall.
 
@IR, that's like saying everyone can play the guitar, well, everyone technically speaking can, but everyone doesnt cause only some are dedicated enough. Same thing, i probably could write if i worked on it, but nay, it doesnt come naturally to me.
 
@ aka oz... thanks for liking it man! :)

@ walk_alone... thanks for the comments man! :nw: and yes i am NOT a gandi bachi! :annoyed: its a long story! :p:

@ d_ist_urb_ed... well... to be very honest, i think if u feel that u should rite then u should definitly give it a shot! u will succeed!

@ rizaaj... good to hear from u man! thanks for reading it! :) yea i do miss him a lot as in A LOT!

@ nimisha.... thanks gurl! :)

@ abhi... thanks man! :) well.... i'll say the same to u wat i just said to distubred...
 
hmmmm....nice poem...i hvn't written anythng like that...i mean for my bro or for my family...cos i neva got a chance to b away from my family....
 
@ garima..... thanks gurl! :) well... trust me u would never wanna be away from ur family!
 
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