hello everyone! another poem from me... and this one is really close to my heart. just finished riting it and thought i could get a response from u guys. i thinks it's simple and the rest i want u guys to decide... it is long but please do read it and don't forget to comment... so here goes... MISSING U! I miss the way u held me in the air Pretending I could fly I miss the way u got me candy In the middle of the night I miss the way u smiled at me When everything went wrong I miss the way u stood by me Once the world thought I was wrong I miss the way u made me laugh When I was already so low I miss the way u yelled at me When u knew it was not my fault I miss the way u messed with my guitar Pretending u could play I miss the way u were my audience Before every major competition that laid I miss the way u partied with ur friends When u knew I’d be waiting to open the door when u came I miss the way u yelled at me Before helping me with maths I miss the way u thought u would leave One fine day I miss the way u said “u won’t miss me” Even though u had tears in ur eyes I miss the way u waved at me Before u set off for ur real life I just hope u succeed in achieving Every goal of ur life Cause u r the one I care for From the deepness of my heart! thanks A LOT for reading and now don't forget to comment! looking forward to them! any advice, any suggestion, any thoughts...don't hesitate just rite it down!
m sure its for her bro....;-) ....................... nicely written dear ..... reps if allowed .... dude count me in also .... i cant write such stuff :
@ cryptic.... yes it is for my bro! thanks for appreciating it gurl! oh and thanks for the reps too! @ d_ist_urb_ed ..... uuummmm...... i am sure everyone can rite! thanks for reading though! @ apurbajd... thanks a lot man! well... u should give it a try only then u can rite! hehe @ maghuresh... thanks for the reps man! really mean a lot! @ born2tab... lol...Thanks a lot! :nw: @ flyingbird... aawww... i exactly know wat u r going through... thanks for the comments!
Simply AWSOME....................... Awsome thts the only word that comes in my mind every time i read it................ nice word slection and the secret is to keep it simple.... M-azing...u r not such gandi bachchi yaar afterall.
@IR, that's like saying everyone can play the guitar, well, everyone technically speaking can, but everyone doesnt cause only some are dedicated enough. Same thing, i probably could write if i worked on it, but nay, it doesnt come naturally to me.
sisters r the best in the world.....good poem written....... @ apu and dist, me also in ur list ...........
@ aka oz... thanks for liking it man! @ walk_alone... thanks for the comments man! :nw: and yes i am NOT a gandi bachi! :annoyed: its a long story! : @ d_ist_urb_ed... well... to be very honest, i think if u feel that u should rite then u should definitly give it a shot! u will succeed! @ rizaaj... good to hear from u man! thanks for reading it! yea i do miss him a lot as in A LOT! @ nimisha.... thanks gurl! @ abhi... thanks man! well.... i'll say the same to u wat i just said to distubred...
hmmmm....nice poem...i hvn't written anythng like that...i mean for my bro or for my family...cos i neva got a chance to b away from my family....
