Meri Chahat

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Garima, Sep 15, 2005.

  1. abhi_lovespooja

    abhi_lovespooja New Member

    hey garima
    again a good work
    really yaar its really very touchy......

    keep rocking....
     
  2. vishwa_81us

    vishwa_81us Banned



    Hey garima.. i really respect ur emotions for him.. but 8 years.. then also if that guy is not able to understand ur feelings then he is really very unlucky.. life goes on.. n u deserve sumone better..


    RAAT BHAR JAAGTE RAHE AUR ASHQON KO SUKHATE RAHE,
    PUR YAADEIN ITNI BEREHAM NIKLI JO ASHQON KI JUBAAN MEIN BAHAR AATE RAHE,
    WO HUME NA BHULAYENGE, ISS BAAT SE KHUD KO LUBHATE RAHE,
    HUM TO UNHE BHULA NA PAAYE PUR WO HUME HAR MOD PE BHULATE RAHE,
    SHAYAD WO LAUT KE AA JAAYEN, ISS EHSAAS SE KHUD KO SEHLAATE RAHE,
    DEKHIYE HUMARA PAGALPAN UNKE LIYE SAARE JAMANE SE TAKRAATE RAHE,
    PUR WO KISI AUR MEIN GUM HO GAYE AUR HUMSE DOOR JAATE RAHE,
    ISS GAM NE HUME JEENE NA DIYA AUR HUM MAUT KE KAREEB AATE RAHE,
    UNKI KHUSHI HUME ITNI AZIZ THI KI APNE DUSHMANO KO BHI GALE LAGATE RAHE,
    WO HUMSE SE KHUSH HO JAAYE ISLIYE UNKE AAGE APNA SUR ZHUKATE RAHE.........


    vishwa :cool:
     
  3. Gaurav Bhatia

    Gaurav Bhatia New Member

    Garima.....i must say....great poem.......but i have suggestion......y r u occupying ur mind and giving urself a sweet tension...for that person who does not care abt ur feelings.......8yrs ....such a long time....it means alot...buddy...
    u may face a problem in future as i think it becomes diff to have a good married life as u would always expect ur hubby to be like Nishant, as u get so much used to.....for Nishant......am i right or wrong??
    anywys....great poem......
     
  4. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    Well....he thinks that m a sweet gal....thats it :annoyed:
    & he has a new gf now...i think that makes the story clear :cry2:

    :think: usme aisi kya khass baat hai :think:.....pata nai...but I love him :eek::

    Btw, devil....wats garimom ???:aggre:
     
  5. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    Gr8 Diva...Good for u ...
     
  6. rocking_devil

    rocking_devil Banned

    @garimom - i myself duno :grin:

    @gf trend - where did i declare that u are so sweet and i have new gfs now?? :p:

    @khaas baat - yeh...there is something abt you thta keeps me going!:grin:
     
  7. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    @abhi
    @vishwa
    @gaurav
    Thanks for the concern guyz....this the reason y i feel so happy being a part of IGT....I hv seen & felt that here we r concernd about each other...& thats so good :)
    Thnakx a tonn :)
     
  8. jekyll

    jekyll Banned

    Good. Nice work.
    Cannot Say much, coz personally I dont like to get in such a situation.
     
  9. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    @Devil that wasnt for u sweety....u said something & i replied on that :)
    u askd wats khaas in Nishant...& he mite b thnking the same way for me...so that was the reply...:grin:
    i hope aapke chhote se dimaag me baat aa gai hogi....:p:
     
  10. angelden20

    angelden20 New Member

    Ya Diva gud 4 ya
     
  11. Gravity_defies

    Gravity_defies New Member

    hey garima......nice poem....can relate to it.....its jus tat i think uv been waitin since 8 yrs n me since 4 yrs....
     
  12. rocking_devil

    rocking_devil Banned


    woh tho yeh baat tha!.....ok ok i got inside my smal brain! :grin:
    arey yaar,, if u really liked that chap.....tho seeda uske muh mein bolna tha na?!?!:grin:
     
  13. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    Thank goodness that u got it *phew*
    arrey baba bola tha na....wo gana suna hai...'apun bola tu meri laila, wo boli fenkta hai sala'...woichh haal hogaya re baba...
    I kno that he wud neva come to me....he knows that m madly in love with him...& I think thats the reason....when everythng in life comes so easily u tend to insult that 'everything'...u dont pay the attention/importance that they deserve....I think this is the case here...
    but u kno wat....some1 told me that failure in Love teaches u alot...m willing to learn :)
    May b I deserve some1 better than him ;)...& he is not worth me :grin:
     
  14. rocking_devil

    rocking_devil Banned


    @shock smiley - now u have made it even more confusing for my small brain in my head that is!:grin:

    according to that bold line,, it proves that you are boy and your bf is a girl! :mad: :p:
     
  15. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    He he he ....bhery bhery funny Mr.Devil....that was just an example .:annoyed: btw....tum mera shak yakeen mein badalne ki koshish kyu kar rahe ho??? :think:
     
  16. jekyll

    jekyll Banned

    HUH?
    what has happened to the people?

    some one is waiting fro 8 years, someone for 4 years ...

    what is all this?
     
  17. Gravity_defies

    Gravity_defies New Member

    cant help it.....iv tried movin on....but every time i take a big circle and am bac there again.....
     
  18. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    & thank to God that u r not involved in this kinda vicious circle....it su.cks
     
  19. astroguru26

    astroguru26 New Member

    garima..u knw the real meaning of your name....integrity...that one of the factors makes or break the person...
    why are so hell bent still for the person....you face the reality thats very true but not strange.......infact the separation ,yearning has made you good in words expression thanks him for making you like that way.............god has send him to you to make you learn the way world works......pen is stronger than swords
    poetry is quite imaginative and ..........rest all depends on you

    rohit
     
  20. rocking_devil

    rocking_devil Banned

    according to my latest research, studies and analysis,, i have come out wid an interesting or non interesting fact that garima loves cats!:grin:
     

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