Saadhaaran si ek choti mombatti ban jane ki abhilasha hai hamari… Taaki jab tum jeewan ke poustak main prem ke do pan.ne padhogi aur lamhon ke har ek shabd main khoud ko phir se dubaara paaogi… Tab shaayad mein apni sukshma roshni se teri sewa kar paaounga… Tum…Anuvaadak Hum…Lekhak Anantkaal tak…! Amanush...
ok...i believe i have a strong command over hindi..but still i dunno y i couldnt really get the orientation of ur poem..and this is the first time. ur such a good poet so i cant miss ur work..will try to read again and post the feedback.
Thanks for the nice comments...Vini Ji ! Maybe the English translation can bring some more light... I would like to be a simple little candle, to give you faint light while in the book of life you read pages of love, rediscovering yourself in every line of the day… You the translator and me the narrator for eternity… Take care...ok ? Amanush...
Hamare vichaar ko pasand karne ke liye bahout dhanyavaad...Nimisha Ji ! Younhi hausla dete rahiyega... Apna khayaal rakhna...ok ? Amanush...
thanx a lot for posting the interpretation..it proved quite helpful....very beautiful poem..just loved it!! reps
good one man .....pehle pata nahi tha yaha koi jyaada hindi jaanta hai i feel english translation main bahut kuch aur reh gaya ...par hir bhi jo jayaka orignal language main hota hai vo tranlation main bhi ho ye to mushkil hai..... Ek line yaad aayi "Rooshani ne iss kadar challa, ki andhere se pyaar ho gaya raat ke sang duur tak ja kar pata chal...
The pleasure is mine...Madam ! Thanks so much Amanush... Thanks for reading and appreciating...walk_alone ! Take care Amanush... Andheron main thokar lagegi, to raaste ke pattharon ko dosh mat dijiyega...Madhuresh Ji ! Kavita ko pasand karne ke liye bahout dhanyavaad Thik se apna khayaal rakhiyega...! Amanush... : Shukriya...Garima Ji ! Amanush...
meri abhilasha Nice ,but the real meaning n the real feelings dwells in the hindi version .After transalation we canjust understand the meaning but not really the feelings.
mere pass iss ka bhi javaab hai dost abb kyaa kareen aye dost kuch aisi apni kismat hai... thookar jab lagi, to paathar bola never mind friend abb to tujhko meri aur mujh ko, teri aadat hai.... kaisi rahi ?
@ Sakhi...! Hamare or se aap ka hardik swaagat...! Ehsaason ko samajhne ke liye bahout dhanyavaad...! Younhi hausla dete rahiyega...! @ Madhu...! Aap ka jawaab bahout acha lagaa...Dost ! Ab hum aap se kya kahein...? Bas, younhi pattharon se thokar khaate rahiye ! Kaun jaane kiss mor par koyi Ahalyaa Ji aap ke shubh kadmon ki raah dekh rahi hogi...:grin: Take care...ok ? Amanush...
