Mera Pyar (cover)

I am a beginner at playing the guitar, and just did my first cover today. Its not amazing, but I would appreciate some feedback from you guys as in how to improve.

Thanks a bunch

https://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=365419

 

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i opened the page but the track was not playing

 

it got opened but wasnt playing well
actually there were lot of pauses

 

hm.. unable to open it coz no flash in my firefox..

anyways.. i guess u will get a better feed back in the SoundTrack forum. so moving it there...

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hmmm... it seems to be working fine.. try the "lo-fi" version.. might work better than