Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Nirvanafreak, Jan 31, 2005.

  1. Nirvanafreak

    Nirvanafreak Official Freak

    Everything is falling into place,my memories are all so clear,
    Moments of laughter,but also sorrows and fear.
    Memories of the’s all returning to me,
    Now I’ll show those memories you never wanted to see,
    Sometimes,they’re as beautiful as a black rose,but with thorns along the way,
    They would sting me,but the wounds wouldn’t stay.
    Tonight I close my eyes and try to leave all my memories behind,
    It’s time for me to rest,I hope you don’t mind.
    The pain became too much of a problem and I could no longer stand it,
    It’s time for me to leave...unfortunately,we’ll have to split.
    The end has ripped us apart,no longer to unite,
    My soul has disappeared in the darkness of the night.
  2. Nirvanafreak

    Nirvanafreak Official Freak

    Why doesn't anyone reply to this one? :rock
  3. Subhro

    Subhro Argentina lost :"(

    good work nirvana !..

    igt has got some pretty talented poets.. :)
  4. Nirvanafreak

    Nirvanafreak Official Freak

    hehe,thanks again...Only problem is that I'm not very good at finding a beat that fits with my lyrics yet...
  5. zoomingrocket

    zoomingrocket TeChNiCaL AdMiNiStRaToR

    Never Giveup...
    Well easy to say.. i KNOW... and hard to do!

    Anyways, good poem...
    Just try to mingle more with its rhythm and it would be really beautiful!

  6. Nirvanafreak

    Nirvanafreak Official Freak

    :)thanks a lot,I'll try to work with the rhythm and all...
  7. DesiPride143

    DesiPride143 BEHAVE!

    nice dude...hey guyz we have another poet in here...nice one dude..really love it...

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