Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by #iR@, Jan 9, 2006.

  1. #iR@


    hi everyone! well me back with another poem... this time its really close to my heart cause this is actually ritten for a group of friends that will never be forgotten and i might NEVER be able to meet all of them! here goes.... again looking forward to ur comments... and not just comments i mean HONEST COMMENTS! the ones who read my stuff regulary must be expecting this line like always! :eek:: hope u like this poem and do comment on it!


    with every tear that streams down
    i remember the time we all spent together
    the time that i remember even today
    like it just happened yesterday

    those days of my life
    would never be forgotten
    by me or by u
    that i know is true

    all i wanna do is go back in my past
    and capture my last minutes with u
    say everything i say today
    hug u and never let u go

    i would never meet u all again
    but i know my memories will never fade away
    all the words that u have said to me
    are engraved in my mind

    all the time we have spent together
    is still in my head like a film
    the pictures that rest near the fire place
    will always remain with me

    i promise u
    none of u will ever be forgotten
    cause all of u made those days so beautiful
    and treasured reminiscences that i will never forget

    thanks for reading..... and don't forget to comment! looking forward to ur response...
  2. can_i_play

    can_i_play New Member

    gave words to what we all feel ........

    Good one ....
  3. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    awww.. such a sweet poem!

    made me think of my school frnds.... (i AM gonna meet em again though!)
  4. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

  5. #iR@


    @ can_i_play..... thanks a lot :)

    @ cryptic.... thanks... hope u meet them soon!

    @garima...... aaawww..... see that's the reason why i don't like ppl who r busy!they don't have time for the ppl they care for! hehe kidding yaar.... thanks anyway! ;)
  6. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    touched my heart.....too.....
  7. rizaaj

    rizaaj Forum Leader

    nice one hira.. touching..
  8. #iR@


    @ nimisha & rizaaj.... thanks....

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