Maybe!

Today,My heart is heavy,
and I can hardly breath;
maybe today is the day,
when I finally need to realise the truth.

I waited for you,
and hoped with all my might;
maybe today is the day,
when I need to "let it go".

you have been a beautiful dream,
a never ending love story;
maybe today is the day,
when I need to wake up.

I bid you goodbye,
and bow my head to thee;
maybe today is the day,
when I need to set you free.

go my love and live your life,
though its very hard to say;
maybe today is the day'
when I decide that I will never cross your way.

(for the only one I ever loved)

 

nicely written....hope u cross her way again..

 

thxs Garima....not best of my poems but smthng i wrote and posted even before reading it again.

 

no one interested in giving reviews :cry2:

 

VERY NICELY DONE... really well ritten! keep it up man! i just hope u just start feeling better soon! keep riting man...:beer:

 

casanova claiming to have written a poem for the only one he ever loved :

Liked it !!

 

well its really heart touch...
deep 4m inside...

keep it up....

Regards...
Abhijeet!!!!

 

kyun Varshita ji...casanova ka dil nahi ho sakta....LOL
i cant hide real me behind this stupid tag i gave myself...maybe just to feel gud abt myself.

thxs for the review but.

 

thxs abhijeet...maybe u have not read all my poems...they are of kinda same emotions.........thxs for the comments.

u too hira.

 

hey ,
truely speaking ur poem has touched me , i must say congratz to u for composing this poem , keep it up n i aspect some another good poems too.
diz

 

wow

i thought i wdnever get any morecomments...thnxs mr.joshi...i appreciate ur time...and yes i have written poems far better than this one....maybe u can search for them in the thread.

thxs again.

 

Good, good work, i wonder how i missed this one. Simple, but you manage to get your message across wholly.

 

thxs dude.....simplicty is the essence of life.

 

I would love for you to critique my poem.....at your leisure...

 

Beautiful poem
jus the right words a person should say
and should be heard
But hope things arent still at "Maybe"

take care!

 

This is lovely...

!!! "let it go"..."if it comes back"..."then its yours" !!!

 

thxs amit and bubly...............our lives are made up of lot of "maybe's and maybe not's"......so this situation wd always be there in one or other form its just abt selecting the right option.

Disturbed....iwd certainly read ur poems and comment accordingly.

thxs all.

 

true!...
it all depends on the decisions a person makes!