Maya, tum kaun ho! zindagi ya maut Pal bar me haat lagthe ho, phir pisal jathe ho tum koi chiz ho ya phir kuch nahin Muskan bankar lab se chalakthe ho, kabhi nigaho se ansoon bankar nikalthe ho tum dilbar ki kushi ho ya bewafa ki gham ho, ya phir kuch bhi nahin Sant ki tapsya se bhari santhi ho, ya kisi aawara ki chanchal man ho ya phir kuch bhi nahin Akhir kaun ho tum! Pransn se bhari zindagi ho, ya sach ko pardha karnevali maut ho ya phir kuch bhi nahin Kair, jo bhi ho tum meri kavitha ho.
the flow of thoughts is good ..rather very good ...but if u culd explain this poem in somelines to thodi madat mile gi...i belive ........ waht do u want to say in totality..whats the message??
