Khabar hogayi hai maut kab aayegi.. Roz khauff se ab jeeta hai tu Zindagi aur kitni khushiyan laayegi Ye nazar andaaz kar gaya tu Apno ko hi paraya kardiya Qasmein waadein tod gaya Yeh soch ke tere baad kya hoga Jeete jee unko aansoo main dubo diya Khuli baahein leke khade hai woh Apna tujhe maante hai jo Maut ke aane se pehle apna pyaar lelo Kahin judai ke ghum mein...Tumhara pyaar hi maut se taqra na jaaye! O.k my 2nd attempt at writing..do let me know what you think..im not really good with hindi but given my best!
Death and love.. been 2 of my fav subjects recently...but why do i feel i ve heard this somewhere?? :think: Its good !!
Im sure uv heard sumthing else...sum1 rly close 2 me has been my inspiration whilst i was writing this!Death & love often have alot in common..not only love 4 others but love 4 life aswell...
simple poem but definaly written with a lot of emotional content fist u two need to tell ye knight kaun hai yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrrr ???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? and all chiks on this forum r behind him.....USS MAIN AISA KYAA HAI HAI, JO MUJH MAIN NAHI....
^Lolz..!yea u got tht rite its a vry simple poem...truly written with alot of emotion! Chalo il chnge my username 2 mads_diwani..hwz tht!jus messin!
Great stuff Nice 1 fat's...!But f**k which corner of your heart did this come out from?What made you write such a poem?Because you did say to me whatever you write relates to your life & you dont write something you dont feel!Whose this for..? But it's a great poem hats off..You'v just started writing & if this is the begning then way to go girl!
@ amit thanks! @ Garima.....by the end of writing this i did have tears in my eyes! @Broken_heart U ask me 2 many questions tht r hard 4 me 2 answer but seen as uv liked wht iv written this ones 2 u: "Bana ne ke liye nikle hai humbhi apni ek pehchaan Banna chahte hai duniya ki shaan yuhi milta raha agar aapka sahara Cheen ke dekha denge humbhi aasmaan se ek taara!" Luv, Fatima!
Aww fat's thanks for that! I love asking because i never get answers!When you answer i wont ask because nothing will be left to ask!(I know your going to say STOP ANNOYING MEEEEE!)But i really get a buzz out of it..Lol!
