Maut se pehle judaai

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by knights_diwani, Feb 19, 2006.

  1. knights_diwani

    knights_diwani New Member

    Khabar hogayi hai maut kab aayegi..
    Roz khauff se ab jeeta hai tu
    Zindagi aur kitni khushiyan laayegi
    Ye nazar andaaz kar gaya tu

    Apno ko hi paraya kardiya
    Qasmein waadein tod gaya
    Yeh soch ke tere baad kya hoga
    Jeete jee unko aansoo main dubo diya

    Khuli baahein leke khade hai woh
    Apna tujhe maante hai jo
    Maut ke aane se pehle apna pyaar lelo
    Kahin judai ke ghum mein...Tumhara pyaar hi maut se taqra na jaaye!

    O.k my 2nd attempt at let me know what you not really good with hindi but given my best!
    Garima and sweetie like this.
  2. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    Death and love.. been 2 of my fav subjects recently...but why do i feel i ve heard this somewhere?? :think:
    Its good !!
  3. knights_diwani

    knights_diwani New Member

    Im sure uv heard sumthing else:)...sum1 rly close 2 me has been my inspiration whilst i was writing this!Death & love often have alot in common..not only love 4 others but love 4 life aswell...
  4. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    simple poem but definaly written with a lot of emotional content
    fist u two need to tell ye knight kaun hai yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrrr
    and all chiks on this forum r behind him.....USS MAIN AISA KYAA HAI HAI, JO MUJH MAIN NAHI....
  5. knights_diwani

    knights_diwani New Member

    ^Lolz..!yea u got tht rite its a vry simple poem...truly written with alot of emotion!
    Chalo il chnge my username 2 mads_diwani..hwz tht!jus messin!
  6. UjSen

    UjSen *#!EVIL*!!

    knights diwani

    aur kaun bacha hai?

  7. Broken_heart

    Broken_heart New Member

    Great stuff

    Nice 1 fat's...!But f**k which corner of your heart did this come out from?What made you write such a poem?Because you did say to me whatever you write relates to your life & you dont write something you dont feel!Whose this for..?
    But it's a great poem hats off..You'v just started writing & if this is the begning then way to go girl!
  8. amit82cse

    amit82cse Silent observeR

    :rock: beautiful:rock:
  9. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    :cry1: really touching....felt each n evry word written ther....reps coming ur way.............
  10. knights_diwani

    knights_diwani New Member

    @ amit thanks!
    @ the end of writing this i did have tears in my eyes!
    @Broken_heart U ask me 2 many questions tht r hard 4 me 2 answer:) but seen as uv liked wht iv written this ones 2 u:
    "Bana ne ke liye nikle hai humbhi apni ek pehchaan
    Banna chahte hai duniya ki shaan
    yuhi milta raha agar aapka sahara
    Cheen ke dekha denge humbhi aasmaan se ek taara!"
  11. Broken_heart

    Broken_heart New Member

    Aww fat's thanks for that!
    I love asking because i never get answers!When you answer i wont ask because nothing will be left to ask!(I know your going to say STOP ANNOYING MEEEEE!)But i really get a buzz out of it..Lol!
  12. knights_diwani

    knights_diwani New Member

    Lol...Eggjactly STOP ANNOYING MEEEEEE!U knew it was coming..din ya!
  13. slash_i_m

    slash_i_m Laid to Rest

  14. knights_diwani

    knights_diwani New Member

    Yeah thats ma name:)!

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