Masters of Evil

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by hate_breeder, Feb 13, 2006.

  1. hate_breeder

    hate_breeder worms r shcarryyy :'(

    a new poem by me, its incomplete , just review it
    Masters of Evil
    I was lost in Desert...
    at dawn of midnight
    my head got hurt...
    time for rest felt right

    From far i saw palace
    which looked evil
    it had splendid towers
    which appeared medieval

    when i went inside
    i felt darkness surround me
    i couldn't hide
    as demons were looking for me

    when light was dim
    they came like thunder
    they caught me in
    and took me to lucifer

    he lived there as king
    satan was his real name
    i just remembered one thing
    that i wanted fame

    i was decived by his looks
    my soul he wanted
    in me intrest he took
    and made me annointed

    The Master of Evil
    unleashed his wrath
    took my soul
    unto his dark path
  2. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    hmm.. good effort...

    but the whole fascination-with-the-devil thing seems a bit over the top!
  3. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    somethings a miss... dunno wat... anyways an honest effort !!
    Keep posting :)
  4. hate_breeder

    hate_breeder worms r shcarryyy :'(

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