this is the second marathi poem im posting here after my shraavan .... it is some what like Nazdeekiyan.. ...that i posted earlier in hindi... its short but sensuous poem.. hope marathi people here wud like it... waiting for reply from all.... sparsh.... pahila-vahila ha sparsh asaa chandani.. . tufaan maajve har ek hriday spandani.. ekaat ek guntalaa doghancha shwaas ha.. . jannu ek swapna ek sundar.asaa bhaas ha.. behosh karun geli hi nayanaanchi aas.. . darval.la dhund mand preeticha ha waas.. kshan.suddha thambalaa doghanchiye antari.. . dhund to, dhund mi.. kshan kaisa ha mantari.. khsan haa.chi aisa ki jagg jhaale stabdh.. . sparsha.tach virle, te muk saare shabd.. : comments plz...
man....i did take long time to get it in.......marathi worda and me r enemies..i think.....but its lovely as usual......and u r gonna say it tomorrow wen we meet......
Wow... such a nice comparison... Shwaas aani Swapna cha bhaas... really nice! Gud one dear.. Keep writing.. REgards, Zooom..!!
@zoom....... thankie thankie thankie........ its coz of your reps now... i get that second green dot..in front of my reputation...... thaaaannnnkkkk yyyoooouuuu..........!!!!!
kahi shabd nahi kalale pan nantar sagle kalale chaan lihites! mala aavadli PS- "mantari" cha arth kay? majhi marathi yevdhi changli nahi :
^^^ mantari means " magical moment" @nimisha anyway ...sahee hai! it is from girl's point of view ... but can u convert it to a boy's? if you... then reps comin ur way ( i doubt any girl knows male mind)
@martina.. thanks... aaplyasarkhe lok aahet vachaylaa.. mhanunach aamhi marathi kavita lihito.. @metal fan.. i take up ur challenge dear.... i will post such poem soon.... n thanks for appreciating....
@all marathi people in igt....... no more replies......????????????? aapan marathi.che ase durlaksha karu nakaa....
