Manzil se ghoom gayee..

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Ali Yawar, Dec 10, 2012.

  1. Ali Yawar

    Ali Yawar New Member

    Here is a new poem I wrote yesterday...

    Tune jo pukara to..
    Manzil se ghoom gayee..

    Mand-mand purvayee..
    Jiyra hilor gayee..
    Nanhee se jhurjhuree
    Nas-nas jhinjhor gayee..

    Sapnon ki dalon se ..
    Naynon mein jhool gaye..
    Jhulse hue talve bhi..
    tarpan ko bhool gaye..

    Haule se koyaliya..
    Kaano mein kook uthee..
    Bematlab man mein koi..
    Paglee see hook uthee..

    patlee si muski jhhat..
    adhron pe jhoom gayee..
    Tune jo pukara to..
    Manzil se ghoom gayee..

    Jaise ki tune mere..
    Aanchal ko chher diya..
    Naino mein sapon ka..
    Kaajal saa pher diya..

    Baalon mein hath de…
    Choonar uchaal diya
    Naino ke darpan mein..
    Rom-rom dhal liya..

    Jaise deh ki umango ko..
    Honthon se bhanp liya..
    Hathon ke poron se..
    Ang-ang ko naap liya..

    Ansuan ki boondan see..
    Palkon ko choom gayee..
    Tune jo pukara to..
    Manzil se ghoom gayee..
     
  2. although its a lovy-dovy-hindi poetry ... i dont think this appeals to me to say "i liked it" i didn't ... Ali to me its boring !!!
     
  3. Ali Yawar

    Ali Yawar New Member

    Thanks for your comment..... i just wrote it to break my dormancy period... it have prolonged for quite a long time.... i think it did the work for me...i currently have like..thousands of ideas bubbling in my head.. and by the way it's not lovey-dovey hindi poetry... have you ever read khusro??? :) :) :)
     

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