Man eat maN

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by distorted, Jul 14, 2009.

  1. distorted

    distorted satan

    MAN EAT MAN
    .
    Trying not to fall into the sea of darkness,
    You fly across the sky on bloody wings of love,
    Your sleeping dreams awake as nightmares,
    Drowning into your tears, suffocation is near.
    .
    Judgement day is just a question of time,
    For your vein is fleeing, getting begrime.
    Pelf, suicide on the street,
    Everywhere around you, watch it breed.
    .
    .
    Out to find the truth,
    Blasphemous sleuth
    Man eating man
    Infinite vengeance.
    [killed conscience, killed conscience]
    .
    A hook right through your tits,
    Chop and eat and you are finished
    Death is your final plea
    Cant u see the bloodred sunrise?
    .
    U have to bear the scourge, u'll be chastised,
    Asphyxiated till your demise.
    Imminent bloodbath, cant save the scorn,
    Your own plague pit and yes you adorn.
    .
    .
    Out to find the truth,
    Blasphemous sleuth
    Man eating man
    Infinite vengeance.
    [killed conscience, killed conscience]
     
  2. distorted

    distorted satan

    Lyrics frm one f the recently composed track.
    \m/ death metal \m/
     
  3. distorted

    distorted satan

    Anybdy cares to chk it out?
     
  4. distorted

    distorted satan

    40 views, no response???
     
  5. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    i coulndnt relate to it much .....!
     
  6. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    hey

    its good to read something i may have missed otherwise.. and its indeed good..

    you may expect more reviews and feedbacks on your own creations
     
  7. distorted

    distorted satan

    Thanx mate, there's one more from me on the forum...
     
  8. slayersid18

    slayersid18 New Member

    actually i dont enjoy such lyrics very much...you mainly write such stuff or do you come up wid dis for death metal songs only? or you write drifferent styles of death metal???
     
  9. distorted

    distorted satan

    I usually write like dis, thou i write quite less... not to ignite a feud, i consider this kinda stuff mature... N working on one more upcoming track ''death in utero''
    Will post the lyrics as everything gets set...
     
  10. iluvmuzik

    iluvmuzik New Member

    i really liked th lyrics man its cool....u got a melody to go along with it?btw u a guitarist?
     
  11. this ws some death metal shittt as thy say i suppose

    keep posting
     
  12. rickkkyrich

    rickkkyrich Guest

    i love it man... i wish i cud write somethin like this.. but i normally write lovey dovey stuffs...
     

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