Some times you feel it was the last but then wahts after the it dosents lasts long..!! Title: mamma I dont feel, good in these shoes Thought these are called the solders boot for they march the way which ever they choose.. yes the guys tell they look good on me but mamma I dont feel, good in these shoes.. its a heavy pair and rough form inside the laces keep on tightning, nails from the sides force me to walk for the bigger virtues but mamma I dont feel, good in these shoes.. if the sole is the sole than its all worn out some how i just order but i can never shout i am softly strong, unable to refuse but mamma i dont feel, good in these shoes..
liked this poem.. its very different n nicely rhymed remembered same kinda thing i read in d past... Shoe Pain The shoes I bought don’t fit me, they were perfect at the store. But since I brought them home, they just don’t feel good anymore. I thought the sole annoyance was the problem in the sole. My heel that wouldn’t heal, though, soon began to take its toll. It then seemed my archenemy, the arch, caused all my woes, But that did not explain the pain I felt along my toes. Perhaps these etched-in letters make my shoes not fit too well. My left shoe has an R inscribed. My right shoe has an L.
@nimisha.. the poem u talkin abt is jst a joke! wont say it's the same kind if poem as madhuresh's @madhuresh i kinda liked it, sm mistakes here n there but still a good effort
wow! dat was something different from wat u usually rite! must say it was something i enjoyed reading! nice flow! keep riting!
thxxxxxxxx all and nimisha ji ya ...u r the forunm leader and u surely know the rules ..if i copied .... then do wht you shud !
Wow this is one of those works which can be caegorized "much deeeper than it appears"...liked it a lot....keep coming with such "out of the way" stuff.. "its a heavy pair and rough form inside the laces keep on tightning, nails from the sides force me to walk for the bigger virtues but mamma I dont feel, good in these shoes.." Says a lot...undoubted reps..
I don't know whose written it but it's brilliant. The message is superb and so is the execution. madhuresh, I dont know what this controversy is but honestly, did you write it? I've seen you write some truly horrible poems yet I've seen some really good ones too so I'll believe you if you said you did and I like the way your mind works even if I've felt a bit repulsed at times.
Uh dude i was jus jokin -.- Saw many of your replies at once =) Im not much into poetry...can appreciate em well enuff but writin em is outta question for me. I write rap
since this thread is already talking about bjr takin over the poerty forums i don think i have to spam on any other thread! i mean WOW U R REPLYING TO LIKE EVERYYYYY POEM! but i aint complaining man... the comments u gave me U CAN DO WAETEVER U WANT! :dance: lol
haha, I've been getting bored out of my skull and I need to work on my English and written communication skills. What better way than an online forum?
yes maine likha...chori kar ke bhi kyaa milega...virtual world main thoughts chori karna ka kyaa fayada hai...aur jaha tak kharab likhne ki baat hai... accha bura is all perception ...i dont like pamela anderson, some day she will fall because of her (.)(.)..lol thanks:- ziky monica :- kyaa irada hai madam ! dont go on these poems and words they decive...