Lyrics - "Bad" - By Lana

Discussion in 'English Lyrics - Submit or Request' started by Lana, Jan 27, 2012.

  1. Lana

    Lana New Member

    The thoughts of you aren’t in my heart, they’re somewhere just above
    Somewhere between forgotten and hate that I once thought was love
    Every time your mind was somewhere else I knew it was with her
    And in my own it pierced my sight to show someone you never were.

    But it’s easier with crazy because it doesn’t last so long
    Because being touched by simple couldn’t ever feel as wrong
    I was just so happy to be that corrupted girl and mad
    That simple just won’t do it, I’m addicted to someone bad

    I wonder what it would be like to settle for something secure
    To do what was expected and seem all good and pure
    To fall in love for real this time and fall into routine
    And sink into something easy because I can trust you won’t be mean

    But it’s easier with crazy because it doesn’t last so long
    Because being touched by simple couldn’t ever feel as wrong
    I was just so happy to be that corrupted girl and mad
    That simple just won’t do it, I’m addicted to someone bad

    You light up, you’re with her now and attention’s not with me,
    In just a t-shirt on your bed, but you can’t seem to see
    I can’t stand that coldness but I’m addicted to this pain
    And I’ll think it’s easier to stop going back to you again.

    But it’s easier with crazy because it doesn’t last so long
    Because being ****ed by simple couldn’t ever feel as wrong
    I was just so happy to be that corrupted girl and mad
    That simple just won’t do it, I’m addicted to someone bad

    That nice now just won’t do it, I’m addicted to someone bad.




    Lana x
     
  2. alpha1

    alpha1 I BLUES!

    You write songs?
    Lana Lang?
     
  3. Lana

    Lana New Member

    I do indeed x
     
  4. alpha1

    alpha1 I BLUES!

    Yeah this indeed sounds and looks like a song material.
     
  5. wylder

    wylder New Member

    Wow!! Awesome lyrics.

    Did you write it with a tune in mind cos the syllables fall in rhythm for the most part.The chorus is definitely catchy and the theme is also nice.

    This line -> "I was just so happy to be that corrupted girl and mad"
    Would this work instead? ->
    "I was just so happy to be that girl who's corrupted and mad"
    or "I was just so happy to be that girl all corrupted and mad"

    And how about a breakdown chorus like:
    "You can call me crazy 'cause it didn’t last too long
    Being used by him was simple but it never felt wrong
    I'm still happy to be that girl corrupted and mad
    'Cos simple just wouldn’t do it, now I’m addicted to him so bad"
    - for the chorus after the last verse?

    Just suggestions, its great work as it is.. Keep them coming...
     
  6. alpha1

    alpha1 I BLUES!

    Looks like Lana Lang has taken to the skies with the Superman ...
     
  7. Lana

    Lana New Member

    Hey Wylder. Sorry, as Alpha said I've been busy with Superman. He's just so possessive recently ;)
    I didn't have a melody in mind no...I'm not so good at writing music unfortunately. Yes those lyrics work! I'll try to write another soon so let me know what you think.

    Lana x
     
  8. alpha1

    alpha1 I BLUES!

    Ah, Lois Lane would be very interested in all this ...
     
  9. Lana

    Lana New Member

    New song lyrics up..let me know what you think :)
     
  10. Super-Admin

    Super-Admin Administrator Staff Member

    Nice job Lana !
     

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