looking back

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by b-gin, Apr 13, 2006.

  1. b-gin

    b-gin New Member

    Wonder what you should have done
    Wonder just what might happen
    Wonder what is happening to you
    Wondering what happens when you wonder your life away?

    A series of moments sets off a chain of situations
    A handful carry all of the weight of the anchor
    The more you dwell the heavier it gets
    The present tense is something you will soon forget

    Past and future swirl around you now
    consuming all of your precious time
    shed tears for the begginning of man
    worry about the end of the line
    nimisha and Subhro like this.
  2. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    really good..u can write well
    simply loved these lines>
  3. Subhro

    Subhro Argentina lost :"(

  4. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    reps assured for that....
    good work..
  5. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    very impressive...reps added

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