This is another of my poems which I managed to make into a song... LONELY NIGHT It’s a dark lonely night. It’s a dark lonely night. Under a sky full of stars, Playin’ a lonely tune on my guitar. The pale moon says to me, You are so alone, so lonely. Even my shadow has deserted me, But the distant lights, so lovely. Have I been cursed with quarantine, Or received solitude in blessing? I have nobody around me, They just haunt my memories. Why did all of you abandon me? I’m all by myself in my hour of need. Why have you all forsaken me? I need you, come back to me. It’s a dark lonely night. It’s a dark lonely night. Under a sky full of stars, I am all alone with my guitar.
it seems that the poem was going one way but it sorta changed directions....what happened to this happy feeling? why did you become so desprate to have them back at the end?
wow sonali, nice observation. I didn't expect anybody to notice that. But, I don't seem to have any explanation to that. In the song also, I play the chords in such a way that the music swings from pessimism to optimism to pessimism, again. Thanx for the excellent feedback, guys...