Lonely night

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by maverick8218, Dec 2, 2004.

  1. maverick8218

    maverick8218 New Member

    This is another of my poems which I managed to make into a song...

    It’s a dark lonely night.
    It’s a dark lonely night.
    Under a sky full of stars,
    Playin’ a lonely tune on my guitar.

    The pale moon says to me,
    You are so alone, so lonely.
    Even my shadow has deserted me,
    But the distant lights, so lovely.

    Have I been cursed with quarantine,
    Or received solitude in blessing?
    I have nobody around me,
    They just haunt my memories.

    Why did all of you abandon me?
    I’m all by myself in my hour of need.
    Why have you all forsaken me?
    I need you, come back to me.

    It’s a dark lonely night.
    It’s a dark lonely night.
    Under a sky full of stars,
    I am all alone with my guitar.
  2. DesiPride143

    DesiPride143 BEHAVE!

    u have done it again, Maveric!!!!
  3. esgallindeion

    esgallindeion Minstrel Knight

    Nice... how about emailing me the mp3 if u have?? :)
  4. Sonali

    Sonali ::>> Welcome <<::

    it seems that the poem was going one way but it sorta changed directions....what happened to this happy feeling? why did you become so desprate to have them back at the end?
  5. maverick8218

    maverick8218 New Member

    wow sonali, nice observation. I didn't expect anybody to notice that. But, I don't seem to have any explanation to that. In the song also, I play the chords in such a way that the music swings from pessimism to optimism to pessimism, again.

    Thanx for the excellent feedback, guys...
  6. Sonali

    Sonali ::>> Welcome <<::

    hm....:think: maybe it's just coz you're weird....lol (kidding)
  7. maverick8218

    maverick8218 New Member

    LOL sonali... you are the millionth person to call me weird...

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