Little Girl

i tried, but not really into hindi poetry, sorry

 

hey trish,
i suck at reading between the lines and all....
but if it isnt something that complicated.....I GOT IT!

 

Well-written, girl. You get two thumbs up. Lovely imagery.

 

u made my mouth open wide with awe coz of this poem..one of ur best works surely!! :shock:

ps- im ur "pankha" now

 

great thinking... expressing same thru poem -great idea, one who did it wonderfully is you. reps for you great work

 

never mind.

 

@bjr, vini, itwasnoteasy

thnx

from all the feedback i've received on this poem (here n otherwise) either ppl think it's "theek-thaak"(meaning crap) or they think it's really good... nice to know that u ppl liked it..

 

ab winter mein main itne saare pankhon ka kya karoongi???

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well u shuddve posted the poem in summers ...

 

lolzzzz :Laughing: yeah...u shud rather hibernate till winters last

 

^ well she can actually hibernate :RollLol:

cant u cryptic?

c'mon even a polar bear does it :grin:

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oops :boxed:

 

^^^u beat urself up for that???

what's this.. "jekyll, hyde n cryptic"... as in "me, myself n irene" :RollLol:

 

nope ...
polar bears (i hope u know are quite hefty - nad they really can mess u up easily)



that is a good movie title ...
and what about this as song title ---> Cryptic Jekyll cannot Hyde (there is some Ozzy's song similar to that)

 

Nice thots Crypt....awesome

sorry for reading it late as i was on a leave & dint get much time to IGT. & now when m bk, i'll mk sure that i read all ur poems, cos i just cant stop loving ur poems.....keep going like this.

 

^^^thnx

i make it a point to read all ur poems too, they :rock:

 

thats sho shweet of u angel.....same pinch for that :grin:

 

OUCHHH!! :annoyed:






thnx :grin:

 

^^^^he he he....