Little Girl

Not too good : but here it is anyway....

Little Girl

Stranger, you apall me to the core
Have you the slightest idea
Of what you have done?
She was too young to understand
A confused little child she was
Tell me, to you, was it fun?

Driven into depression
At such a tender age
All coz of what you did
Crying herself to sleep
Knowing not where to turn
Under her sheets she hid

Into the mirror
She could not look
It would only make her cry
But tried to hide the pain
So she would smile
At the same time wondering "why?"

Years down the line
She may have forgotten
But she will never forgive
For you stand for
What she would loathe the most
For as long as she lives

 

^^^ OMG

what a godamn dark theme ... i hope i got your peom right ...

 

^^^i think u did

 

well again my ques ... how do u get "inspiration" (pardon my use of words having bad taste in this case) ?

 

nicely ritten cryptic :beer:

 

@hira

thnx.. : )

 

ok stuff..............

 

i think even i got the theme...my..how come u write such poems yaar..u r too good...

 

@abhi

so u got it too....

thnx

 

NO DOUBT, ITS WONDERFULLY TIGHT, A REAL GOOD EXPRESSION, "ABSOLUTE" IS THE WORD FOR SUCH AN EXPRESSION.
MUST HAVE BEEN WRITTEN IN A SINGLE STROKE, I TOLD YA EARLIER YOU ALWAYS KEEP THE STRINGS TIGHT & TUNED...

 

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heheh @ spy,wht was tht????

 

frightening theme trish.......:shock:
emotions nicely expressed......i gotta learn to put emotions in words like you...good job!!

 

how the hell can you deal with such dark stuff? I mean write such stuff...
Definately requires a lot of skill (you do have that but still)

 

@shashank

my poems r always written in a single stroke...


@hardik

thnx... frightening it definitely is....... but it happens

 

@shsnawada

dunno how...

 

yeah spy, what was that

 

do u wanna go out with me?

i seriously think we could get along.

at the first instant ..i thought it was somethin that happened to u..and u were writin it in third person..

 

^^^that's d best comment on my poem so far...

**doesnt know what else to say**

 

yup i know

butt, Ofcourse they are....it is really good one...
Hey did u read my new poem...