Lets do something new

I guess crazy got busy....but I will do the translation stuff...


Khaabon ka hai..ye,Mera aashiyaan...
Rango se bhara ...khusiyon ki jagah..
Dil Ko Harek pal..Milta hai sukoon ,
Aisi ye jagah..aisa ye jahaan...!!


Tum Ho door kyon.... Saathi aiye Mere..
Aajao Ab tum, sab kuch chod Ke...

Mere Humsafar ...Mere Rehguzar...
Tanha Naa Kate Khabon ka safar.......


My world is made of dreams
full of colours...place of happiness
the heart get pleasure everytime,
such is this place...my place of dreams

Hey my love...why you are away..
leave everything ..come and join me.

Hey my friend my company..(I don't know how to say this)
I can't complete my journey of dreams without you.

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Wahi Surat...mujhe baar baar
dikhti hamesha...

julfein ghaneri..
jaise kale baadal..
jheel se naina....
Naino mein Kajal

bechain kar de...kajal ki dhaar..
mujko hamesha....

I see the same face...again n again

long black locks of hers
like black clouds..
eyes like colour of lake
and the kajal(wats english for it)...in the eyes..

I get restless by seeing your kajal in eyes..always..
I see the same face again n again..


...........................let me know sukrut if you have any ideas..though i have posted on lyrics request in lyrics forum......lets see i get something good from there..or not..

anyone else having \any beautiful lyrics is most welcome......to share it with us

 

exams finally over!!!!!!! oh yeah hols rock!!!!!!!!

hmm.......

yeah nice lyrics!
it sound good in hindi though.........i was just thinking.......maybe we can keep this only hindi....i dont like hin-eng remixes too much.......esp rap eng..

it sounds cheap......

im ok with the lyrics.........but maybe some more lyrics need to be added as u said....
cool....

let us all move to the nest step.................
tune........

start makin some tunes and post the link here.......


cheers!
:beer:

 

woops!

I'm so sorry. Good job, Rakesh. Let's begin with the first few lines and I hope Rakesh won't mind if we need to 'update' the lyrics as we progress.

So, are we supposed to come up with our own tunes and post them here? If yes, I'll see if I can come up with something.

 

yup....make ur own tunes and we'll finally select one......

cheers!
:beer:

 

sorry for jumping in late guys..
i liked the whole concept..
rakesh your lyrics are total filmy! i liked that...
i've just started with guitar n consider myself as an amateur.. but i'm sure i'm gonna give it a try..

c ya guys..
n keep the thread alive.

 

thanks

you are welcome neo....
Here everyone is free to modify the words to suit his tune....lets see who puts up the tune first....
i made one tune but it is not that nice...so trying to make a good one...lets see when i put up that....

 

Wahi Surat Version1.0

Hi Sukrut...Crazy ...and Dadarumpum .....I have tried out...one version of Wahi Surat.....with some simple chords...check it out at my link
www.betarecords.com/cool.heart

GM ......................CM
Wahi Surat...mujhe baar baar
dikhti hamesha...
G..........Am
julfein ghaneri..
..............G
jaise kale baadal..
jheel se naina....
Naino mein Kajal

G...........................CM
bechain kar de...kajal ki dhaar..
G
mujko hamesha....

Tere bin, jeena Kaisa...Tere bin, Marna Kaisa,
Jinda Reh ke bhi.......


Its somewhat rough recording..i have synth and drum softwares...so i can make it much better but any of you can suggest or put up your version.to make this thread living...I want two awsome songs from IGTians out of this thread.....

 

Excellent!!!!!!!!!!

Man this is excellent, you really did a very good job, the melody sounds very well. Its now to complete this song with the bass, drums, synths etc.
In my opinion, when people listen to a song, the first thing they hear is ofcourse the voice, it has to be good, it must touch the listener, your voice is good so this is good. Secondly the melody of the song has to be good too and that is good aswell. And then the music has to be good and thats what we have do to complete this song.
Man once again, this is really good, a very, very good beginning!!!
My reps are coming to you man, you really deserve it!!!!!!!

 

happyyyyyyyy

i totaly agree with keoraf , vry goog work rakesh. wen i head all i feel is happy
and i really want the song to be compeleted.......

 

Rakesh, i've made some music for this song, i hope you guys will like it!
Its just a little part of this song, will try finishing it as soon as possible!

https://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=645920

 

Boy o Boy o Boy !!

Rakesh you ROCK! Super!

Keoraf! Man! Super track. Can I embed some guitar in it ;-)

Rakesh, is there anything the rest of us can do?

[ps: I'm very sorry for not being here. I've been traveling around like crazy . ]

 

You ......are a .............genius man.......I did a lil bit but you made is just so wonderfulllllllllllllllllll .......thanks a lot to you man ....this song will definately will be completed and everyone is welcome to put some interlude ..from there side and put it up the link in this thread....!!
Keoraf will mix it up in and add that up in the common composition......

.hats of to IGT Sountrack forum....

I will complete whole lyrics..now...!!

crazy / Neo /IGTians try out some interlude stuff..........and anyone who wants to add to the original lyrics is most welcome....:rock:

 

Hey Rakesh, you don't have to be so shy and humble, in my opinion you are the genius here man, its you who made the song, the melody, i just added some bass, drums and synths! This song is going to be the a very good IGT-production i guess!!
And Crazy_Engineer, ofcourse you can add some guitar stuff, i think everyone who think he/she can add something to make this song better is very welcome!!!
These are the chords used:
The chords of the sax solo in the beginning:
/ G / F / F / G/ 2x

Melody:
/ G / G / C / G /

Brass solo:
/ C / Bm / Am3-G1 / G /

Melody:
/ G / G / C / G / 3x

Legends:
Every chord between the slashes is one measure
Am3-G1 = 3beats Am and 1beat G

 

Hey Rakesh, very, very good job man, you sung this litlle part very well and it also sounds very well as i think it's really good. Why didn't you informed us! I hope to record the rest tomorro, at least as soon as possible!
A little question, it should be better to change the third time Wahi surat......, try to use some other lyric, it would be better i think, don't you think?

 

Oh yeah, forgot to ask about the tempo, what do you think, is it too slow? The recorded tempo is 100 BPM, just tell me and i'll change it the next recording!
Take care man!

 

Thanks Keoraf.....

Hi Keoraf...though I feel the tempo is just perfect. ..!!
Tell me if I am singing properly with the tempo...?

just I forgot to mention how the lines should be I mean the antara ..part etc.

I think...
Mukhda Part is just perfect....we can now try to create the Antara...Which I had sung partly in the composition..with guitar..

Mukhda..
some interlude

(G )Julfein Ghaneri...(Am)
jaise kaale badal(G)
Jheel se Naina (Am)
Naino mein Kajal(G)

Bechain Kar de..Kajal Ki dhaar (C)
Mujhko Hamesha...(G)
Wahi Surat ,Mujhe Baar Baar ,
Dikhti Hamesh...(2)

interlude

Galiyon se gujru(Am)
Jab bhi tere main(G)
dhoondhe tujhe hi..(Am)
aksar mere nain(G)

Chaahat meri ...dil ki sanam(C)
Sun le jara Sa(G)
Wahi Surat ,mujhe baar baar, dikhti hamesha..
sapno mein bhi..khabon mein bhi..dikhti hamesha..

This is the basic structure of the song which is in my mind...
I will modify the words as per need......with the rhythm....I think song is looking good with the present rhythm...

anyone..has better ideas....please come forward and share...!!

Crazy/Sukrut/Neo Please yaar come on buddies...what i want we all of us who have contributed to this song..may be by idea..like sukrut and crazy and Neo..should record one version of song in their own voice and we can share it with fellow IGTians...wat do u say guys??

 

Rakesh you are just too good, but i thought maybe you want it a little faster cause your version is a bit faster than mine, but its oke, just wanted to know if the recorded tempo was correct for you!
Take care man!

 

i've been trying different tunes for your song rakesh..
sorry for being late but i'll post my version only if i like it..

i'm in touch with this thread.

 

Guys just updated this wonderful song, i just created the Antara with an interlude, hope you guys will like it.
This is just a demo, Rakesh try it out and let me know if its good or not!
Will add fill-ins and fill outs someday, will also try to make other solo's! Its also made without any kinds of effects used, will do that when the song is completely finished!!

Here are the chords of the Antara and the interlude:

Antara:
/ G / Am / C-G / G /
/ G / Am / C / G /
/ G-D / G / G / C / G /


Interlude:
/ G / C / Bm-Am / G /

Edit:

Oooh forgot the link:
https://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_music.cfm?bandID=645920

 

Keoraf ....grrt stuff man...I am really amazed......i have put in my vocals ....in the full song
(some minor sur faults may be there...that was because I recorded it hurriedly...as I got some urgent work ....still i hope people would like it...)

www.betarecords.com/cool.heart

Neo you can record it in your voice or even your guitar version...and put up for ideas of improvisation....
looking for feedback guys....for this first version... Crazy/Sukrut come on wat happened ....need ur help in making this song more appealing man..:beer:

Hi IGT friends ,please give your frank feedback for improving this song...