Leave Me Alone

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by BubblyMartini, Mar 10, 2005.

  1. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    Leave me alone

    Its hard for me to move on with you near me
    i cant breath with you eyeing me
    the air is stifling my voice is quivering
    Dont touch me now, my hands are shivering

    gimme some air to breath gimme some space to move
    Go away from my thoughts Stay away from my dreams
    My heart is weak, it longs for you
    why dont u say u love me too?

    So jus Leave me alone just let me be
    i'l be ok, i'll be fine talk to me just any other time

    DrSaurabh, atthanii and Subhro like this.
  2. DesiPride143

    DesiPride143 BEHAVE!

    very nice....so who is da lucky guy/gurl?.....don't know if u a guy or a gurl...hehehe..but nice poem though...one thing though...how come all da desis here never write poems in urdu...don't get it...i mean all da desis leaving back home write in english...and me here in US writing ma poems in urdu...weird huh?
  3. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    I'm a girl!:)
    i thought u knew

    i'v did write in hindi before
    but it was affecting my english so i dont write any hindi stuff lately..
  4. Subhro

    Subhro Argentina lost :"(

    :shock: whoa !!!! gr8 gr8... !!!

    reps 4 u bubbly :)
  5. DesiPride143

    DesiPride143 BEHAVE!

    no i didn't know u were a gurl sweetie...dis is da first time i m talking to you...anywas, affecting ur english?...how so?...just by writing poetry?....hmmm...i wonder if i sound like a FOB out there?.. :p:
  6. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    if u write in a certain language u gotto think in tht language
    when u write in hindi u have to think in hindi

    n i was exposed to a lotta hindi coz of the friend group in school
    and writing in hindi deteriorated my english as i started using more of hindi than english....i mean translating hindi to english and then writing

    n if i get bak to hindi Now, i'd do the same with english

    i donno if tht explanation made sense, but thts my view :eek::
  7. DesiPride143

    DesiPride143 BEHAVE!

    ummm...not really.....but ok...
  8. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    thanks for the reps Subhro
    i didnt know u'v given me reps tht too good ones :eek::
  9. DrSaurabh

    DrSaurabh Wh@+s Up D0C

    BLOWN AWAY.......amazing :)
    lovin it reps for u

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