Leave me alone Its hard for me to move on with you near me i cant breath with you eyeing me the air is stifling my voice is quivering Dont touch me now, my hands are shivering gimme some air to breath gimme some space to move Go away from my thoughts Stay away from my dreams My heart is weak, it longs for you why dont u say u love me too? So jus Leave me alone just let me be i'l be ok, i'll be fine talk to me just any other time ==Martini==
very nice....so who is da lucky guy/gurl?.....don't know if u a guy or a gurl...hehehe..but nice poem though...one thing though...how come all da desis here never write poems in urdu...don't get it...i mean all da desis leaving back home write in english...and me here in US writing ma poems in urdu...weird huh?
I'm a girl! i thought u knew Anwys i'v did write in hindi before but it was affecting my english so i dont write any hindi stuff lately..
no i didn't know u were a gurl sweetie...dis is da first time i m talking to you...anywas, affecting ur english?...how so?...just by writing poetry?....hmmm...i wonder if i sound like a FOB out there?.. :
if u write in a certain language u gotto think in tht language when u write in hindi u have to think in hindi n i was exposed to a lotta hindi coz of the friend group in school and writing in hindi deteriorated my english as i started using more of hindi than english....i mean translating hindi to english and then writing n if i get bak to hindi Now, i'd do the same with english i donno if tht explanation made sense, but thts my view :
