kyaa ye banda is a poet

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by madhuresh, Jan 31, 2006.

  1. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    This poem is by one of my friend he asked me to tell wether he has poetic skills or not .....now u all know meri to kuch samajh main nahi aata...u lovely and great people plz put down ur comments on his small poem....plz

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    Title:- Ankhen

    Takdir se hum gila bhi nahi kar sakte…

    Aur unki mohhabat ko ruswa bhi nahi kar sakte…..

    Her muskurahat per chehre ki 14 muscles use karta hoon..

    Per unke liye na-jaane dil ki kitni muscles per chot kerta hoon…

    Meri muskurahat per na jao dosto…

    Ye to aankhe hai jo ek alag hi fasana baya karte hai..


    tika ke putliyoon ko ek jagah kehta hoon ki "Accha hoon"

    ye palkeen jhuk ke uthti hain aur sab bata deti hain !!
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    kuch daam hai kyaa ?????? can he be a poet ??????????
     
  2. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    abee yaar kuch to likoo ...ok just say
    yes or no
    kuchh to kahoo ??
     
  3. Amanush...

    Amanush... Tanha Rahi...!

    Hamein bahout pasand ayi yaha kavita...! Aap apne dost se keh sakte hein ki wo ek uttam kavi ban sakta hai...!

    Younhi ounke kalaam hamare beech share kiya kijiye...thik hai ?

    Amanush...

    :)
     
  4. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    bik-kull thik ........;)
     

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