Kya isse zindgi kehte hain...

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Garima, Jan 9, 2006.

  1. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    Back to my sad poems....herez the new one...


    Pal Pal mar kar jeene ko zindgi kehte hain
    Ham har lamha muskura kar aansu peete rehte hain

    Doosro ko dekh lagta hai
    Ki kabhi yu bejhijhak khilkhilayen ham...
    Reh jaate hain armaan dil me dabaye
    Kyuki kismat me hamari likhe hain sirf gam hi gam...
    Isliye ham har lamha muskura kar aansu peete rehte hain

    Kabhi jab gamoan se bhare
    Is safar ka anth pas nazar aata hai...
    Ham sukoon ki aas lagaye wahan pahunchte hain
    Aur wo fir duur chala jata hai...
    Ham bas ye kehte reh jaate hain..
    Ki ham har lamha muskura kar aansu peete rehte hain

    Hamein dekh logo ko lagta hai
    Ki rehte hain duur hamse saare gam...
    Ab unhe kon bataye
    Ki aansuon ka samandar is dil me chhupaye chalte hain ham.
    To bas unko yehi keh ke reh jaate hain
    Ki ham har lamha muskura kar aansu peete rehte hain

    Thanks for reading :cool:
     
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  2. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    absolutely beautiful...

    :cry1:

    i know exactly what u mean... :eek::

    reps dene ka jee kar raha hai but cant :(
     
  3. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    yes..beautiful..!!
     
  4. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    Beautiful!!
     
  5. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    Khushiyon ke chirag gam ke aansuon se jalte hai
    Khushi aur gum main farq samajh paye
    isliye gum ka hona zaruri hai
    na ho na-umeed ki daaman main khushiya na aa saki
    ek din aisa ayeaga ki daaman hi chota pad jayega
    ki khushiya milegi tumhe beshumar..
    aur hoga humesha dosto ka pyar

    **hugs**

    Your a gifted lovely girl Garima :)
    the poem is fantabulous and somethin i think i can relate to..
    God Bless..
    Tk Care..

    LOaDs Of LovE
     
  6. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    @Trish....wanted to send this as an SMS to u on sunday...the moment i wrote...but cudnt...cos of low balance :eek:: good to c u as the first one here...
    @Nimisha, Knight_ki_gf......thats yaaroan
    @Bubbly....Thanx for those warm huges....i did feel the warmth when i read ur post...thanx for those beautiful lines which made me smile. Thank u soooooooo much :):)
     
  7. notty_lad

    notty_lad sudo undress

    Garima .. Shall i say something now ?? I'l take da pleasure of being da first guy to call it Beautiful n touching .. :) .. keep up da good work .. :)

    n ya *HUGS* from me too ;) n dat too warm n tight ones :p:
     
  8. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    ^^^awww thanx so much Mohsin...& yeah, u too ...thanx for those Hugs...yeah yeah..warm & tight ones :p:
     
  9. apurbajd

    apurbajd ~#$&amp;*$@*^$

    ^^can relate to this very well Garima ......guess got to do sumthing wid ...whatever........

    why do u write dis kinda poem alwayz, tragedy queen? ...not a complain.... compliment infact as ....... it really stirred my heart (if dats the word).............................. as always nicely written feelings ........
     
  10. Hardik

    Hardik .:.:.:BoRn TaLenT:.:.:.

    ~~~~~~~~~B-E-A-UTIFUL~~~~~~~~~~~



    i could rep u this time.......... :dance:
     
  11. abhi_lovespooja

    abhi_lovespooja New Member

    hey garima
    this is something my kinda feelings..........
    and might b u kno very well.......
    good poetry with good skills...
    keep writing.......
    abhi
     
  12. shak

    shak Harrr!

    :cry1: :cry1: :cry1: :cry1:
     
  13. shak

    shak Harrr!

    :cry1: :cry1: :cry1: :cry1: :cry1: :cry1: :cry1:
     
  14. notty_lad

    notty_lad sudo undress

    ^^^:RollLol: :RollLol: :RollLol: :RollLol:
     
  15. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo


    dont cry sweety.....btw...r u crying cos u dint get the meaning or u r crying cos u understood those lines ;)<just want to mk u smile> :grin:
     
  16. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    & notty....stop making fun of my shweet frnd...

    btw....y r u so obsessed with staring eyes...as per ur new avtar :think:
     
  17. shak

    shak Harrr!

    ^ cuz i know ... what no one knows ... aaah .. and that gives a whole new meaning to this poem .. you know what i am talking about garry .. come on .. move on ..
     
  18. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    ^^ i kno wat u mean Shak...thanx for being ther buddy
     
  19. notty_lad

    notty_lad sudo undress

    I believe Eyes speak a lot about a person .. n a person's feelings .. so muh last avatar was also eyes .. n this one too ;) its not an obsession though ..

    :cry2: i'm not ur chweet friend ?? :cry2:
     
  20. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    awww....now u dont start crying....mah shweeeeeeeet buddy :grin:
     

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