~Kuch Kaho to Zara...~ Chand ki madham roshni main Halka sa ik suroor aaye Raat ki madhoshi main Hum tumhaare kuch kareeb aaye Kuch kaho to zara... Kehna chahte hai dil ki baatein bejhijhuk tumse Ijaazat bhi le chuke hum apne is dil se dil kahe.. Kuch kaho to zara Hoth sil jaate hai tumhaari aankhon ko dekhkar Nazare jhuk jati hai tumhari nazron se milkar Kuch kaho to zara... Rehne do woh baatain purani Kehne do dil ko tumhari dil se baatain thodi Gum ho jao meri aankhon main tum yuhi Kuch na kehkar bhi kehti hai baatin ye kai Thaam lo pal bhar ke liye haath mera Saath chahe na jane kabse ye tera Phir taro ko dekhkar kuch haseen pal guzaar lo Is raat ki khoobsoorati tum phir nihaar lo Kuch gum tumhare tum mujhe udhaar do Ye lamha khone na dena tum yuhi Kuch kaho to zara...
Wow.. I mean .. I totally understand wats goin on here .. Great combination of thoughts, words n da pen .. !!
simmering thoughts makes it really nice to read...............good presentation..........hope to see more from you rohit astroguru26
good work i just will ever a guy ask for a girl to kuch kaho to zara. its very hard to keep em silent. i guess if i ever wrote a poem it will " bass ab chup to karo" lol
Thanks a lot everyone.. **hugs** @madhur --hum kuch kahe to problem na kahe to problem ajeeb problem hai yaar :
BubblyMartini :nw: :nw: :nw: I love your poem :dance: :dance: :dance: Ab tum bhi kuch kaho to zara door baithe ho itne, pass aake milo to zara so yaa huin kabse tumhari yaad mein haath laga ke jagaoo to zara :beer:
i couldnt believe that it was Amit and not anyone else to wrote that not that you always think my poems arent good but i expected a few corrections : But thanks a zillion tonne
great poem. a poetess already needs no one to correct...but has the responsibility to resurrect the feelings and thoughts of poetry through poems and by giving invaluable suggestions and comments to others'...and btw as you are already on this job..you need no mention of this...jus tellin that you are rocking!!! :rock:
