~Kuch Kaho to Zara...~

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by BubblyMartini, Feb 4, 2006.

  1. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    ~Kuch Kaho to Zara...~

    Chand ki madham roshni main
    Halka sa ik suroor aaye
    Raat ki madhoshi main
    Hum tumhaare kuch kareeb aaye
    Kuch kaho to zara...

    Kehna chahte hai dil ki baatein bejhijhuk tumse
    Ijaazat bhi le chuke hum apne is dil se
    dil kahe..
    Kuch kaho to zara

    Hoth sil jaate hai tumhaari aankhon ko dekhkar
    Nazare jhuk jati hai tumhari nazron se milkar
    Kuch kaho to zara...

    Rehne do woh baatain purani
    Kehne do dil ko tumhari dil se baatain thodi
    Gum ho jao meri aankhon main tum yuhi
    Kuch na kehkar bhi kehti hai baatin ye kai
    Thaam lo pal bhar ke liye haath mera
    Saath chahe na jane kabse ye tera

    Phir taro ko dekhkar kuch haseen pal guzaar lo
    Is raat ki khoobsoorati tum phir nihaar lo
    Kuch gum tumhare tum mujhe udhaar do
    Ye lamha khone na dena tum yuhi
    Kuch kaho to zara...
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  2. notty_lad

    notty_lad sudo undress

    Wow.. I mean .. I totally understand wats goin on here .. Great combination of thoughts, words n da pen .. !!
  3. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    thanks dear..
    like i said...it gives me a feeling of incompleteness..
    jaise Kuch kaha na gaya..;)
  4. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    so simple n so nice..!
  5. #iR@


    well done gurl! :beer:
  6. astroguru26

    astroguru26 New Member

    simmering thoughts makes it really nice to read...............good presentation..........hope to see more from you

  7. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    Great expression of thoughts..... which seem so much familiar.....:)
    well done !!
  8. apurbajd

    apurbajd ~#$&*$@*^$

    Kya kahoon??? ;-)

    its gr8 stuff gal...... nicely expressed feelings...... :)
  9. write2madhur

    write2madhur dowdiegeekgizmofreak

    good work
    i just will ever a guy ask for a girl to kuch kaho to zara. its very hard to keep em silent.
    i guess if i ever wrote a poem it will
    " bass ab chup to karo" lol
  10. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    Thanks a lot everyone..

    @madhur --hum kuch kahe to problem
    na kahe to problem
    ajeeb problem hai yaar :p:
  11. write2madhur

    write2madhur dowdiegeekgizmofreak

    well yeah right problem to we guys have to face who lend you a hearing ear lol
  12. amit82cse

    amit82cse Silent observeR

    BubblyMartini :nw: :nw: :nw:

    I love your poem :dance: :dance: :dance:

    Ab tum bhi kuch kaho to zara

    door baithe ho itne,
    pass aake milo to zara

    so yaa huin kabse tumhari yaad mein
    haath laga ke jagaoo to zara

  13. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    i couldnt believe that it was Amit and not anyone else to wrote that
    not that you always think my poems arent good
    but i expected a few corrections :eek::

    But thanks a zillion tonne:)
  14. Sharmontime

    Sharmontime New Member

    great poem. :cool: a poetess already needs no one to correct...but has the responsibility to resurrect the feelings and thoughts of poetry through poems and by giving invaluable suggestions and comments to others'...and btw as you are already on this job..you need no mention of this...jus tellin that you are rocking!!! :rock:
  15. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    i'm outta words actually.. :eek::
  16. zoomingrocket

    zoomingrocket TeChNiCaL AdMiNiStRaToR

    Keep writing dear..

  17. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    Thanks dear.....donno how i missed this:eek::

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