Kobita o gaan

here cometh the third one

first of all; thanxx friends for reading my poems(if u say them to be so)
2nd of all ; thanxx for the reps :

today i'm postin' a small one which i've just composed.
Actually i have a full lot of poems(!) with me composed in earlier dayz; but accordin to her order i can't share those with anyone :sadbye:

here comes my little creation..

sei chena mukhta aajkal aar chokhe pore naa..
chokhe na porar moto sei ektai mukh..

obbosso chokhe porbei ba ki kore????


aajkal sobai to amar motoi mukhosh pore.:alien1:

<jani na eta kobita holo kina. anywayzz constructive criticism is always :welcomean ed>

 

ki je likhlam...! well... bepar ta holo.. conversation between a guy and a girl...! dekhun kemon lage..!

Guy:
shey bolche take , ami boli toke
ugrota ar rommota, k nebe kaake ?

Girl:
"je bolche jake, uddeshe taar hake
chand'er alo, mridu chaya, amar chokher baake ."

Guy:
bolbo shono ei
roder jetuk alo chilo, shetuk aj nei ?

Girl:
"dhur boka lokhhichara!!
chand-chayar kotha tulei... shujji niye tara?"

Guy:
hater churi rokomari - bheloari - ahamori
chokher kone kajol'o ki ..lojjai shey ahamori

Girl:
kajol noito lojja... shey to nojor porar fondi
kajol chokhe kajol kalo chokher moni bondi

Guy:
moni ...uhu asto pukur ,dighir dighol chaya
pakhir danai darun shokti, gorur chokhe mayaa

Girl:
"e raam ..chi chi chi , rupoker ki chhiri
kobi kobi bhab kabbo rajje, ohetuk dada giri."

Guy:
ei je Mrs. ..ektu daran opoman korlen mone hoi
sujji chondro taroka niye korbo kabbo? debe obhoi.

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chorja pod ar kali pod... long distance
ei kobita'r dekhchhi nei kono sense!!!

 

title: Oviggo Premik


Shara prithibite shob jora jora ghore
joto dekhi hridoyta pore shudhu pore.
bhalobasha chhara ami kii koria bachi
bhalobasha naa howate tension'e achi.

bhalobasha khuje ami ghuri daare daare
bhalobasha'r bhoot amar chapiache ghare.
ghar dhore bhoot shudhu kore naranari
"kii re gadha koi tor priyotoma pakhi?"

kotha khuje pai bhebe chintito hoi
ek meye prai'e nei golper boi.
pasher bench'e boshe ek meye - class e
chokhe chokh porlei okarone hashe.
ek meye boikale niomito chhad'e
aar chokhe chaay aar chul-tul badhe.

eder bhetor kew hoy jodi raji
nimishei prem hobe, lakh taka bazi!
prem hobe prem hobe anonde nachi
prem bhalobasha shoho jibonta khati.

prem bhalobasha haay shohoj to noy
meyeder kache gele kii jani kii hoy!
kachakachi asha mane fete jaay buk
'bhalobashi' shobdo ta bole naa to mukh.

mone mone boli 'bhalobashi bhalobashi'
ebar tobe oviggota'r uposhonghare ashi.
prem ful futbe naa, theke jabe koli
mon chaai, shobaike eki kotha boli.

tumi kache ele shob kotha jaay hariye
chuchap thaki aami boba hoye dariye
bohubar boba hoye jana gelo ei
boba'r shotru to nai-i, premika o nai.

 

its good.

the 2nd one is quite humourous ;man.
but i couldn't understand the 1st one!!!

 

god saw me hungry ,he created pizza
god saw me thirsty he created pepsi
god saw me in dark he created light
god saw me without problems,he created YOU



twinkle twinkle little star
u shud know what u are
and when u know what u are
mental hospital is not so far



the rain makes all things beautiful
the grass and flowers too
if rain makes all things beautiful
then why doesnt it rain on u????


roses are red,violets are blue
monkeys like u shud be kept in the zoo
dont feel so angry u'll find me there too
not in the cage but laughing at you!!!



when your life is in darkness,then pray to god and ask him to free u from darkness,and if after u pray and u are still in darkness,then,PLEASE PAY YOUR ELECTRICITY BILL!!!

 

if a packet hits a pocket ona socket on a port and the bus is interrupted at a very last resort and the access of your memory makes a floppy disk
abort, then the socket packet pocket has an error to report

if your cursor finds a menu item followed by a dash
and the double cliking icon puts your windows in the trash
and your data is corrupted as the index doesnt hash then your situations hopeless and your systems gonna crash

if the label on the cable on the table of your house
says network is connected at the button of your mouse
then your packets want to tunnel to another protocol
thats repeatedly rejected by the printer down the hall

when the copy on your floppy getting sloppy on your disk
and the macro code instrutions causing uneccessary risk
then u'll have to flash the memory
and u'll want to ram to rom,then quickly turn off your comp and be ready to tell your mom



well that certainly clears things for me,how abt u????

 

tumko dekha,.........tumko dekha
tumko dekha to yeh khayal aya..
pagaloon ki stock se naya maal aya

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durakht ke paymane pe e husn ka furkat se sharmana
durakht ke paymane pe e husn ka furkat se sharmana
yeh line samajh me aye to mujhe zaroor batana
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mere marne ke bad dosto ansu mat bahana
agar yaad aye humari
to sidhe upar chale ana


kemon holo janiyo plzzzzzzzzzz

 

the genius is back

oh pori you are as genious as u were before.
specially the middle one is a hallmark of your unique style.
by the way no one even gave me a bad rep for my 3rd poem and i think none read it either .Please go through and review.

 

@neel pori....OSHADHARONNNNN!!!!!SIMPLY OSHHHHHHADHARON!!!!!

 

are sobi-y kemon jeno chupchap,ami abar ei thread take chalu kore debo just wait and watch,ami notun kobita kichhuduner modhye post korbo!

 

Chaliye ja.

 

jotil kobita .............i love it........i love poetry,promise and prayer...........
carry on..............

 

gacher patar fak diea akash dakhar chasta,
akasha mukh dubiya ghumiya pori aksomoy,
jega dakhi du choker paprita patar stor pore asa,
meghar porag gaea mekha nirjon prokita k jiggasa kori-
bolta paro tumi ato sundor kano??
kano tumi ato rohossmoyi?
nirbak prokitir uttor milbana janeo bose thaki chup chap-
akasher ak fli chad meghar maj diea asa ama k songo diea jai,
himshitol batash amar ridoy e beugol bajai korun sure,
ki asohho sai sur??
beugol er sur soisob er kotha mone korai ama k.
choto bala thakai pokita k valobashar sopno ta -
ridoy er kotora rakha dieachilam.
taiti ghumonto prokitir rater sundorjo upovog kori.
moddhorate digontar nistobdhotai duto projapoti amar satha roi-
tarpor aksomoy rat furoi-
hoi vor.
akasher rong ar amar valobasha akakar hoea jai,
projapoti duto ura jai- suro hoi notun sopno;
aj amar du chokhr sudhoi sopno-----
sopno-mritto abong valobasha-----------

 

tanmoy vai:::::: apnar kobita ta jotilllllll

akash ta hoito ba aaina.......
lokhho bochor dhora ami tomar mukh dakhina........

 

a new one

sazil its good 2 see we have a new participant in this thread.
welcome to IGT.


yesterday i went to Victoria with my .........
there i saw one sittin alone amidst the thousands of pairs ,on the val. day i tried to catch his moods.........


bhalobasa
isswar
prithibi
konotai hoito chirodin thakbe na.
tumi bhalobasoni
ami bhogobaner dekha paini ar.........
prithibir baki sobai amake dur dur koren tarie dieche.
ami tai nijekei bhalobasi.
ar tora sobai ucchone ja.


comments pls..............

 

bonolota sen part 2


hajar bochhor dhore ami poth hatitechi prithibir pothe
tantra,sumplace else,peter cat restaurant-e
onek ghurechhi ami ei park street-er dhusor jogote
pocket-e chhera tickit sare charte-r train
amake du dwondo shanti diyechhilo
lake gardens-er bonolota sen
chul tar step cute-e laal nil locks
take niye koto ghurechhi forum ,inox
bolechhe,etodin kothay chhilen?
philips bulb-er moto chokh tule
lake gardens-er bonolota sen
somosto diner sheshe shishirer sobder moto sondhya ashe
shob pakhi bashay fere furay shob jiboner len den
thakey shudhu ondhokar ,edike pagarpar hai! bonolota sen!!!!

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Fatafati :shock: !!!!

 

Fatafati!!

MIND BLOWING!!
:shock:

REPS!!

 

hoping

another poem

I ran behind your shadow,
Hoping that you'd look back once,
I stood behind your reflection,
Hoping that you'd turn back to take a glance,
I kept on screaming your name aloud,
But it was so low for you to hear,
You were busy with your new crowd,
You didn't wanna see my tears!
I spend sleepless nights living in the past,
I thought we had everything of love,
Then why did it not last?
Dreams don't adorn my eyes anymore,
They bring out tears,
I still dream,
Even though I know you're not mine anymore
I wait for you right here!
I was waiting at the doors before you shut them,
Hoping that you'd look back once!
I still wait behind those doors
Hoping that you would open them once!





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Ramer Bilaap-The Remix ))))

Dadara ,

ekta comic marka kobita upload korlam, apnera keu ekta jhanko marka sur diya eyitare tiyoiri koren, asha kori bhaloi hoibo.......

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