Khusbu teri

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by kuns200, Mar 5, 2009.

  1. kuns200

    kuns200 New Member

    Hello guys and gals,
    I am posting for the first time on this forum. I dont know how many of u like it. I written for someone but she doesnt seem to have interest in me.

    Here it is........

    Kushbu teri halki si hai, ruh thodi ojal hai,
    tamanna hai tumhhe pane ki, is sawan ki hi durri hai. ............A

    kya, khuda tu dekh raha hai, kyu ki yeh dil ki bimari hai.

    suruaat hui dhimee sein, magar manzil ki guzarish hai.
    is baar thokar sein daar lagta hai, isliye yeh lab khamosh hai.

    aankhein kuch kar nahi pa rahi, haal-e-dil batana hai.

    Kushbu teri halki si hai, ruh thodi ojal hai,
    tamanna hai tumhhe pane ki, is sawan ki hi durri hai. ...........A

    aaj muje jane par, rukne ko maan karta hai.
    kahani aduheri hai, jise puri karne ki duuri hai.

    tamanna hai tumhhe pane ki, is sawan ki hi durri hai. ..........Last line of A

    I am not a poet but this was came from my heart.
     
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  2. i liked it !
     
  3. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    ^
    he shud've written it fer ya.....:D
     
  4. ^hmmm somebody shuld write succh thingy 4 me....ahh...lol's
     
  5. rajesh sahu

    rajesh sahu New Member

    nice dude......................... keep rockin
     
  6. kuns200

    kuns200 New Member

    thx frnds.
     
  7. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    wht d'ya think of me!?!

    oh?
     
  8. ^ lets see ...write but ...ehh exclusively for me ;P
     
  9. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    the next 1 is for you!
    V\/\m/\/V
     
  10. avi.singh

    avi.singh 6 strings lover

    humm..!!??
    thigs are getting interesting..
    let's see what is that...??:p
     
  11. azzu_guitar

    azzu_guitar New Member

    Hey starting kaafi achi thi lekin beech main kahin maja kho sa gya tha. Overall it was gud n i really liked it tu kuch baat to hai. Acha laga bas itna hi kah sakta hun!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  12. kuns200

    kuns200 New Member

    hummm. okies
     
  13. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    What d'ya mean?
    ...vV\/Vv...
    We're jus friends!
    :p
    :p
     

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