khula aakash

hi evrybody.... ny name is aakash..... i have written this poem for my love..... kyunki maine use apna nam diya hai..... maine is poem ko apna naam diya...... please reply..... i need ur love and support..... love ya all.....



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here is the poem:



KHULA AAKASH!!!!


Dard lunga apne pe tere liye
Dil se dua nikalti hai tere liye
Is dard ko mehsus karke to dekh
Saara Aakash hai tere liye

Zinda hun yahaan pe tere liye
Saans leta hun yahaan pe tere liye
Pankh apne faila ke to dekh zaraa
Khula Aakash hun main tere liye

Lamha lamha tarasta hun tere liye
Tanhayee main akela rota hun tere liye
Ek baar ud ke to dekh aasman main
Khula Aakash hun tere liye

Saare faasle mit jayenge tere liye
Sari duriya kam ho jayengi tere liye
Bas ek baar , ek baar ud ke to dekh
Khula Aakash hun main tere liye

Shafali kucch aisa kar dunga tere liye
Ki duniya chahegi muze sirf tere liye
Apni nazrein upar utha ke to dekh zaraa
Saara Aakash saamne hai tere liye

Main yaahaan hun tere liye
Zindagi se mohhabat karta hun tere liye
Pankh faila ke dekh to zaraa apne
Khula AAKASH hun main tere liye

 

^Wonderfully beautiful poem, touched my heart. Good effort.

 

tere liye...good effort....thoda repetation se bachoo dost...monotony kills intrust...u wanted comments hai na ??

 

as a poem.. nice efforts...

as a song... great job..

 

Tuzhe kis kis ka love aur support chahiye. Shafali ko batana he padega :

anyways reps.. u agreed to me..

:beer:

 

good one dude!!!