Hi...Here's one more i came up with..& i seem 2 love this coz its what i feel each morning ! Khul chuki hai ek baar phir aankhen Adhoori rehchuki hai hazaaron khwahishein Kyun raat mein kho na gaye Kitni duaein maangi thi maut ke liye Tune pyar diya bhi...Aur liye bhi Pal bhar mein SAB cheena bhi Khushi mehsoos karvaayi..Ab toh aankhen bhar aayi Kaise jiye ye dard bhadi zindagi? Khuda ya toh khushi lauta Ya maut se taqra de Iss subha ko aakhri hone de Ab toh apne paas bulake hi sone de Maana ye ghum ke peeche tera raaz hai Par ye tera kaise andaaz hai Khuda ye kiss mod pe khada kiya mujhe? Kya maine nahi pooja tujhe? Aaj bhi umeed rakhti hoo tujhse Jhooti hai..Ye dil kehta hai mujhse Kaise bharosa karloo iss dil pe Jabke ussne bhi karli bewafai mujhpe Najane kiss raah pe ab chale Kitne zakhm aur sahe Umeed se hi jeena padega ab Aur kar gaye tere hawale sab!! How is it...?
I am on with poetry classes today :dance: .. but do gals can write that good... garima, fatima.. kanu (not Igtian).... Still goher rocks (may be coz, it's with pretty nice music)... but still catch these lines.. aandhi ho yaan toofan ho..mere mun mein rahe tu sada.. koi apana ho yaan paraaya ho...usse doondhu main kahan.. phir kyun hain yeh tanhaii..kaisi hain yeh ruswaai... ghum ho gaye tum..kho ho gaye hum Boys :rule:
Wow..Thats like so touching...I didn know should i say it personally or post a message here coz iv been told u'v left igt..But neway great stuff jus incase u pop in & check out ur threads!
