khalish si hai..

(a guy says to a gal)
kuch poochu tuzse, ye shaukh nahi meraa..
naahi meraa koi taaluq hai tere jawaabon se..
par tera wajood, mere jindagi me fir se,
quraid.ne lagaa hai, kuch puraane jakhm..
hum chup rahe, par jab dard ka shumaar na rahaa,
hothon se "aah" nikal aayi..

khalish si hai jehen me, abb tu hi bataa de
bas rahi hai tu dil mein, kyu sawal ki tarah..
rafta rafta nikli hai tu ashqon ke saath
fir bhi baaki hai palkon me, kyu khayaal ki tarah..

khalish si hai jehen me, abb tu hi bataa de
teri yaadon ne lipta hai, kyu ek jaal ki tarah..
tere husn ke hunar, tere wajood ke mohre
hume tabaah kiye shatranj, ke, chaal ki tarah..

khalish si hai jehen me, abb tu hi bataa de
lamha lamha gujarata hai, kyu ek saal ki tarah..
waqt ki reit me dafn hai, tute khwaab ke shishe
par khalish si hai jehen me, kyu behaal hi tarah.




comments plz

 

whoaaa!!!!
incredible...magnificant...fantabulous.

"khalish si hai jehen me, abb tu hi bataa de
vakht bevakht kyun mujhe ye hi sila de,
maana galti hui is bedard dil se mere
ab kya saza hai tu hi bata de."

 

hi nimisha,
excellent work.
it seems i am reading some gazal written by some maestro.
good work,if this is the way you keep on going then i am sure one day you would end up writing gazals which would be sung by jagjeet singh for his album.

hope to see that day as soon as possible,
till then reps for you.


regards,
Souman

 

@pamposh.. thanks..
sazaa dene wale hum kaun hai??
sazaa woh hi khud ko de, jisne khaaa ki hai..


@souman
aapne padhaa yehi bahot hai
itni taarifon se, sharminda mat ki jiye..

 

hey good one nimisha..amazing...awesome..:nw: :nw: dont have words....reps for sure..keep on posting...:rock:

 

hey!! thanks devil..

 

*sees thread started by nimisha ,knows its great,gives reps blindly*


reallyy wowing work der!!:beer:

 

*sees uj replied in my thread*
*gets happy as i know reps for sure*
*sees his reply n gets more happy*
*happy*
*more happy*
*more more happy*

 

Man....and to think IGT's adminstrative team could go no lower...

 

*reads disturbs reply*
*wonders is he really trying to irritate me*
*cries out loud*

gawwdddddd.. these people dont let me have anyyy funnn here...

 

hye dear....that was nice....take care

 

hey.i like u yar

 

ye kaun pyaaar ka mara mila app ko jo aisa likha ....
vaise accha likha reps added

isee thik karo..
tere husn ke hunar, tere wajood ke mohre
hume tabaah kiye shatranj, ke, chaal ki tarah..

 

hey i think i hav my second song ...

 

thanks romeo, theworld and madhuresh

@madhuresh.. plzz tel me wats wront with those two lines?? grammar or any word misplaced? cause im not able to find wats lacking.

@romeo.. i just wanna kill you..
remember ??? i had told u,the first para of this song and asked shud i write more for you to compose.. u said "no, its too difficult.."
n now u say u wanna compose.. strange..!!!!!

 

Hey nims its just A-W-E-S-O-M-E :nw:

 

my god nimi di... as usual toooooooooooooo good.... tareef ke liye an alfaaz chhitte se lagneag pade hain... but darn vgood sher...ghazal calibre ki hai

missing u loads nimmi di <HUGSSSSSSSS>

 

thanks dollie n my sweet arpu..
i was waitinng so much for ur replies..

 

nice and quite expressive.......

 

thanks rohit