kashish....

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by astroguru26, May 27, 2006.

  1. astroguru26

    astroguru26 New Member

    baadlon ke beech ek tasveer si hai kuch,
    aur chaayi hai ghataayein , aapne zulf bikharaaye toh nahi,
    surkh si laali hai aasmaano mein aaj,
    nigahon se aapne kahin phir jadoo chalaya toh nahi.

    saat rangon se hai saari fizayein behki-behki
    aanchal aapne bas yun hi dhalkaya toh nahi,
    saari waadiyaan hai khusboo se mehki- mehki
    chupke se aapne kahin muskaraya toh nahi.
    baadlon ke beech...

    mausam bhi kuch ho chala baimaan sa,
    yun phir dheere se aapne aangadai liya toh nahi,
    baarish ki boondein ne bhi cheda raag sa.
    phir se aapki hothon ne kuch gungunaya toh nahi.
    baadlon ke beech...
     
  2. amit82cse

    amit82cse Silent observeR

    sahi boss...achcha likha hai ...
     
  3. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    thoda vo kyaa kehtain hain ...tempo banaya kijiye ....u knw waht I say the tongue shud feel the twist of words..ups and downs rhyme nahi par vahi..hope u got me !
     
  4. astroguru26

    astroguru26 New Member

    @amit....thanks

    @madhuresh...........i will sure keep your suggestions in mind.....

    thanks for reading once again
     

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