Kaali raat

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by knights_diwani, Feb 22, 2006.

  1. knights_diwani

    knights_diwani New Member

    Ok here's another 1..I honestly aint so keen on it but here it is anyway:

    Ban chuka hai rishta kaali raat se
    Jodliya hai usko hamare har raaz se
    Jalne laga hai dil
    Kaali raat ke iss jalte huey diye ki tarah!

    Nibhaa rahe hai waada..Aansoo na bahane ka
    Ussne bhi toh kiya tha....Na rulane ka
    Hum toh na aansoo baha sakte
    Na ye ghum chupa paa rahe hai

    Tabhi toh dard-e-dil bayaan kar bhete iss panne pe
    Kash dard mitt jaata aisa karne se
    Kab tak ye dard seh paayenge?!
    Ab toh khuda se bass ek sawaal"kab meri khushiyan lautayenge?"
     
  2. amit82cse

    amit82cse Silent observeR

    bahut khoob!!!! perfection door nahi....
     
  3. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    Nice poem..:rock:
     
  4. knights_diwani

    knights_diwani New Member

    Thanks to both of u!...
    Keep reading i got another 2 lined up aswell:)
     
  5. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    Very well written.
     
  6. knights_diwani

    knights_diwani New Member

    @ knight_ki_gf thnks 4 reading!
     
  7. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    Poetry machine i wud say....:p: i mean evryday i can see atleast two poems posted by u....& now 2 more lined up:shock: ...cool..wat shud i say...just :rockon:
    This one was again... nice.
     
  8. knight_guitar

    knight_guitar Lead Guitarist

    nice poem.. (sounds dark for sure :) )
     
  9. knights_diwani

    knights_diwani New Member

    @ garima yea i seem 2 give birth to 2 poems each day...1 wen i get up & 1 i end up writing b4 sleeping coz i hve so much goin thru my head!...

    @ knight Dark life so dark lines:)
     

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