Just something i wanted to write.

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by walk_alone, Jan 4, 2006.

  1. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    Just hang on my poor little heart.

    I always thought, how good it would feel when someone would say, “I love you” and really mean it, how good it feel when someone would wait for hours to see you and would smile, once she does.
    One who you can spend countless hours with,
    One who you would never let off your sight even for a thousand of a second,
    One who is just made for you till eternity,
    But how strange, all this never happens in ones life, and even if it does we never expect it from that person.

    Why do we want to fall in love?
    Why do we want to be loved?
    Why do we want to live for someone else?
    Why do we cry and sob if we don’t get the love of our life?

    I wish someone would take all my feelings away. Happiness, distress, sadness, joy, pleasure, and most of all sense of love.

    I want to be alone, just with my broken heart.
    Oh dear heart, I can’t tell you how sorry I am.
    I know you are splintered in thousands of pieces and yet you want to love that person.
    I know that you bleed and yet you manage to beat for the “only one”.

    Though I know that you might not get what you deserve, my little heart but I am sure you have really deserved what you have got till now, pain and misery.

    All the pain and tears would eventually wash you from the greatest sin of all times
    “Sin of falling in love with someone”.
    So, just hang on my poor little heart because I also need you as much as you need her.
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  2. apurbajd

    apurbajd ~#$&*$@*^$

    ^^^and i always used to think a buss/a's job makes u dull................................

    this one rocks buddy................... :beer:
  3. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    nice thoughts but i dont like the 'feeling sorry for ur heart' thng...
  4. tumhare_divya

    tumhare_divya luvs 2 luv...lives 2 luv

    nice poem....it conveys the feeling well....but i agree with crypti....self pity is not the answer....

    so i dedicate this to you.!!!!!!...(on spot poem...)

    Evry time your loneliness puts on yur face a frown.....

    Just think of evry friend yu have thats never let you down...

    And every time your soul yearns love... yur heart's painful distress...

    Just close your eyes....and think of all the ways that you've been blessed....

    Your friends care for you always...their luv... endless like the sky....

    True friendship is eternal...unlike todays sorrows that make you want to cry....

    To feel you are alone....would be to commit to yourself a sin...

    This sin would make you commit yet another by hiding your awesome grin....

    So remember my words and especially this....evry time you're blue....

    That you've got frends...including me....that care a lot for you....
  5. knight_guitar

    knight_guitar Lead Guitarist

    ufff pathetic efforts... !!!

    kidding... when u guys can write something good.. y waste ur talen on erotic poems.. .. nevermind.. that.. good effort.. but won't say.. was great.. !!
  6. tumhare_divya

    tumhare_divya luvs 2 luv...lives 2 luv

    i kno my reply poem is not good...i had only few minutes to type it wen i did...i wasnt trying to make a masterpiece...just a word of comfort...:)
  7. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    so sweet....

    Thxs duvya.................that was indeed very much comforting.

    One would never get hurt if he/she can think thatway during the moment of crisis.Afterall we are humans governed by our emotions.

    I dnt feel sorry for my heart anymore.

    Would be posting few more in sometime.

    Thxs divya once again...u r an angel.

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