It may not b the best...but is definetly outta my thots...so here it is... Jab jab tanha hoti hu Toh mai khud se baatein karti hu Hazaaro sawal utt te hain is mann me Sawal aise jinka jawab dhoodne se bhi nahi milta Jab yeh dil tanha hota hai Toh ye dimag bhi us se ladne lagta hai Kyuki ye janta hai ki dil toh pagal hai Ye bina soche samjhe hi kadam uthata hai Par ye dil bhi kya kare Jazbaato ke aage dil bhi lachaar ho jaata hai Jab jab tanha hoti hu Toh us Khuda se baatein karti hu Hazaaro sawal hai is mann me jo us se poochhti hu Sawal aise jinka jawab shayad uske pas bhi nahi Jab ye mann tanha ho jata hai Toh ye yaadon me kho jata hai Kuchh yaadein chehre pe muskaan lati hain Toh kuchh ko yaad kar mann rone lag jata hai Par shayad yahi dastoor hai zindagi ka Dukh ke baad hi toh sukh ka maza do-guna ho jata hai
well .. seems u were really emotional while writing it .. i like it .. juz try to be more rhythmic .. keep em comin
aah garry garry garrrryyyyyy!! too obvious that you wrote this one without caring for the aesthetic side of it .. very raw and emotional ... and not so dark this time ... thats a good change .. and yeah will need a bit of translation .. as ever *sigh* ...
