Jaana Meri Janam, new composition of Parry & Keoraf!

Discussion in 'IGT Soundtrack - Your Band, Your Gig, Your Music' started by Keoraf, Oct 25, 2008.

  1. Keoraf

    Keoraf Keyboard Player

    Jaana Meri Jaana, new composition of Parry & Keoraf!

    Hey guys just uploaded a new composition of Parry and mine. Parry made the melody as i tried to make some music for this new song.
    Its just a short part of this song, will complete it as soon as i get some time. Its just in the beginning stage, so i have to do alot of work yet to complete this version. I hope you guys will like it, in the meantime, please just check it and leave your comments, criticism etc.

    http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_music.cfm?bandID=645920
     
  2. Keoraf

    Keoraf Keyboard Player

    It seems nobody liked this song, no comments yet!!!??
     
  3. sukrut

    sukrut God Guitarist

    your music kinda reminds me of my sir's......its almost the same....

    the thing i dont like about these type of songs is that it is simply to long drawn and spontaneous.....there are no surprises (pleasant or unpleasant!)....like there are no stops in the beats or no intro and all....

    i dont know whether it's supposed to be like that.....


    but anyway a nice rendition......i didnt listen to the original tune by parry......could you post the link here?


    cheers!
    :beer:
     
  4. parry

    parry Sing ing Sing

    Nice work

    Keoraf : Well it seems everybody is busy in diwali festival. The tune is nice, may be slow but that doesnt matter. Wel i dont know the nitty gritties of the technical stuff but it defintely takes on the feel of the song for sure. Waiting for the complete version.

    Sukrut : Wel yes I know you have a different taste so to say. And yes i agree that there are no high's and low's and the tune is very simple like your sir's :D
    The original song is on the link below. Waiting for ur comments as always.

    http://soundclick.com/share?songid=6669231
     
  5. Keoraf

    Keoraf Keyboard Player

    I don't know what you meant by, its always the same, what's always the same?
    This is just a try out as i already mentioned, so i agree it isn't yet what its gonna be. About the intro, there is an intro, the first 20 secs, thats the intro till now, after that i played the Mukhda and Antara and i will try to complete it as soon as possible!
    Anyhow, thx for your comments Sukrut, at least someone replied!!!

    The original, Parry's own composed version is present on his Soundclick page:
    http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_music.cfm?bandID=824370
     
  6. sukrut

    sukrut God Guitarist

    i meant your music and my sir's........

    and parry could you post your chords?
     
  7. Keoraf

    Keoraf Keyboard Player

    Sukrut: Oke is alright, i hope to complete the final version real soon

    Parry: If you think the tempo is too slow, i'll fix it, made this song in tempo 100 BMP, will make it a bit faster real soon! I'm glad you liked it!
     
  8. parry

    parry Sing ing Sing

    sukrut : The chord prog is very simple of G C D. I posted this song a lot time back and this was the first prog I learnt. And most of my songs were made using this. Will have to try hard to move further and learn some other progressions as wel.
     
  9. Keoraf

    Keoraf Keyboard Player

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    Keoraf Keyboard Player

  11. Keoraf

    Keoraf Keyboard Player

    It seems nobody liked our stuff, come on people, where are your comments!!!
    I don't think its that bad!!!
     
  12. parry

    parry Sing ing Sing

    Comment please guys.

    Hey guys whats up? Kindly give the comments after hearing. Let us know how its all arranged. Personall I feel keoraf has turned iron into gold. But thats my personal opinion. What you all think we need to hear.
    Any suggestions and advices will be highly appreciated.
     
  13. Keoraf

    Keoraf Keyboard Player

    Is this composition so bad people, in my opinion it isn't that bad, we just want to know what you people are thinking about our song!
     
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  14. sukrut

    sukrut God Guitarist

    i didnt knw abt the updated version...


    very very professionally done i must say....lots of everything......drum rolls are good.....instruments have come out well! nice mixing!

    the singing has improved a lot....

    liked this version more.....although i dont remember the previous one to compare!

    reps definitely!! to both!!!

    cheers!
    :beer:
     
  15. Keoraf

    Keoraf Keyboard Player

    Thanks Sukrut, it feels good to hear people liked our stuff!
     
  16. parry

    parry Sing ing Sing

    thanks sukrut

    Thanks sukrut! atleast someone commented. Yes the credit should go to keoraf for the excellent mixing he has done and i tell you he has just scraped and finetuned the sur faults i had in my vocals.
    Hey but where were you all these days??? exams fever? :grin:
     
  17. Keoraf

    Keoraf Keyboard Player

    Thanks alot you took some time to listen to our song.
    Glad to hear you liked it, it isn't your taste, thats just something personal as i think its just with almost everything, it isn't necessary that what someone likes should be liked by everyone!
    At least someone commented, there are so many views and you are the second person who replied, its just a pity nobody is commenting cause i don't think this is that bad!!!
     
  18. Keoraf

    Keoraf Keyboard Player

    I still can't believe so less people replied on this composition!
    In my opinion me and Parry did a good job, isn't it!
     
  19. parry

    parry Sing ing Sing

    Didn't knew IGT would become a non-happening place so soon. Seems like a post facto effect of the global recession. :grin:
     
  20. alpha1

    alpha1 I BLUES!

    IGT's recession started many moons before the global one.
     

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