its killing me.

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by nandy0894, Mar 12, 2013.

  1. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    its burning in my eyes
    its making my mind numb
    its bursting my veins
    its making me travel unsafe lanes

    its trying on tested tricks
    its lighting burnt candlesticks
    its playing with my sanity
    its making me lose rationality

    its prying on my dreams
    its flowing down the bloody streams
    its poisoning my breath
    its pulling me closer to death

    its silencing my thoughts
    its making me see broken pots
    its pouring down my cheek
    its making me so damn weak

    its forcing me to shout
    shout my guts out
    its making my cry
    its asking me to quit, not to try

    its making me go crazy
    its making my vision go hazy
    its taking me away from me
    its making me a stranger to me

    its whisking my life away
    its making me see dark nights in the day
    its drowning me in a depressing sea
    its shutting my ears tight..its freaking killing me!
     
  2. what is "it" that doing soo much damage to you darling ?

    anyways its also making you write awesome poetry
     
  3. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    that is for you to figure out :)..you once said..smthings shall be left unsaid in poetry...so maybe i've just done that ..

    and thank you :)
     
  4. Opps!!

    My lady why dont you spare some hint or clue to help this poor poet. My intellect serves me lesser these days. i know its difficult but it would be quite helpful if the lady can spare some of her valuable time.
     
  5. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    its a chain.. a chain that i myself once tied around my own neck.. now i cant get it out i guess..thats all about it.. :)
     
  6. chain around neck & strap around a finger are symbolic of the largest inmate group across the world ... there are very few relations which crate more freedom !!
     
  7. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member


    not that sort of a chain..chain is symbolic to umm ..a bondage..a smthing..i dunno ..
     
  8. If u knw its a chain and u urself hv tied it ... Then the knowledge of untying and throwing it away is defiantly inside u.. Throw it... Break it ..it will be fun
     
  9. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    trying :) ......
     

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