khauff sa kyun hai zehan mein hamare ruki si sansein aur dhadkano ki awaaz, kaun hai jo mujhmein basa hai kahin, keh raha hai jo sabr rooh-e nasaaz. yun to intehaa hai zindagi har pal ke liye, daaman mein chupe kaante chubte rahein. dard ka ehsaas palkon mein le kar, wajood ki talaash pe chalte rahein. waqt ki bewafai kuch ish tarah se huyi, raah pe bhi un nazaron ko doondha kiye zindagi ne kuch pal ko thama haath, har dard ko muskarakar seh liye. rohit
i liked it Nice work Rohit .. Favorite lines would be "waqt kt bewafai kuch ish tarah se huyi, raah pe bhi un nazaron ko doondha kiye zindagi ne kuch pal ko thama haath, har dard ko muskarakar seh liye."
after so much of criticism in last few of ur poetries... now i say..... yes... i liked it too much... well expressed...n more importantly...one theme throught..!
