Infatuation - A Maiden Fairer than You

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by horsesmouth, Apr 2, 2009.

  1. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    Its just a funny interpretation for how men fall in love every time they see a beautiful woman! Normal of-course, but not love , its Infatuation.


    Trodding aimlessly on a paved path,
    mind not on the job at hand.
    I see a maiden opposite of the road,
    and forget all my errands.

    The fairest dame on earth,
    crosses right in front of me.
    And my mind wandered to the future,
    Falling into a deep reverie.

    My body stays frozen on the street,
    how beautiful you are,
    how well we fit each other,
    Like a flower and the bee.
    We'd roam free together,
    in our blissful company.
    Warm sunshine on our backs,
    and wind blows, ever so slightly.

    Yes, I've begun to love you,
    and i shall care for you.
    My life is all yours,
    and my heart belongs to you.

    As my thoughts turn towards matrimony,
    you turn around and walk away.
    Unaware of a shattering sound,
    my heart breaking...
    Rejected and dejected,
    I move forward too,
    to look at the serenest view,
    A maiden fairer than you.


    :p
    :D
    ;)
     
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  2. is it so...only u knw better....lol

    i like it
     
  3. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    yep, i knew u'd say this
    :p
    n thanks!
     
  4. allstarsband

    allstarsband New Member

    hehe, happens wid me alll tha time! cool poetry
     
  5. alpha1

    alpha1 I BLUES!

    don't forget it happens to girls too.
     
  6. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    ^lol
    @allstarsband
    thanks/.....very few ppl actually read these poems i think!
     
  7. thedisciple

    thedisciple New Member

    ....Nice!!
     
  8. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    thanks!!!.....
     
  9. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    cool one!!!
     
  10. distorted

    distorted satan

    Cool job liked it mate... Reps..
     
  11. suprita

    suprita New Member

    really nice.... very well written.
     
  12. suprita

    suprita New Member

    really nice.......very well written.
     
  13. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    maiden fairer ...fair-dark ...this makes me think she is not fair...girls they r soo insecured
     
  14. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    @niimisha disty madhurerh suprita......
    many thanks to all of you!!!!
     
  15. alpha1

    alpha1 I BLUES!

    dark girls turn me on ...
     
  16. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    lets ask fairnlovely..
    oh wait.....is he still there? or dear disty had his victim?
     
  17. sukriti_hats

    sukriti_hats Member

    lol...i dont kno why such poems make me laugh!! (just kidding)
    but hey....it was good...really good!!
    lookin forward to read more poems frm u....
    tc bye
     
  18. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    //////lemme flirt//////
    u look good wen u laugh......so keep readin it!
     
  19. sukriti_hats

    sukriti_hats Member

    roses are red
    sky is blue
    monkeys like you
    should be kept in the zoo
    do not worry i'll be there too
    but outside the cage, laughing at u...lolz

    just kidding...don't mind plz!!

    hv a nice day!!
    tc :)
     
  20. suprita

    suprita New Member

    dis one is good... though i hav already commented on it once b4... ppl can actually relate to d topic... happens all the tym,dsnt it???
     

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