I'm sorry ...

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by rickkkyrich, May 2, 2012.

  1. rickkkyrich

    rickkkyrich Guest

    I'm sorry for not keeping my promises
    I'm sorry for not taking our love to justice
    I'm sorry for acting so ignoramus
    I'm sorry for keeping our relation nameless

    I'm sorry for stealing your love from you
    I'm sorry for hurting and bidding you adieu
    I'm sorry for keeping you forever in the dark
    I'm sorry for not keeping up with the spark

    I'm sorry that i abandoned
    I'm sorry that our encounter was ill-omened
    I'm sorry that i choose everything but you on the crossroad
    I'm sorry that i can't give back anything i ever owed

    But the only truth i ever told you
    Was that my love for you was nothing but true
    You're gonna be there in every breath i take
    Please forgive me for being such a heartache.
  2. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    Classic style, good use of words in places. In all a good read.
  3. Super-Admin

    Super-Admin Administrator Staff Member

    Nice one Rickky .. Quite true !
  4. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    nice lines..
    but..one hitch.." love's never stolen"
    its the same..as umm.. you can't steal someone's dreams..you can't steal someone's love too
  5. rickkkyrich

    rickkkyrich Guest

    I'm a robber... I can rob anyone of anything...
  6. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    " while you steal my heart..you can't rob me of what's inside it.."
    i read this somewhere..applies pretty well on u.. :)
  7. rickkkyrich

    rickkkyrich Guest

    I can even break into the heart... :p
  8. metalhead_junky

    metalhead_junky New Member

    good...heartbreaking apology...show it to your gal and she might come back.. :)
  9. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    people break out of hearts..not into them..
  10. rickkkyrich

    rickkkyrich Guest

    The problem is she came back :p: j/k
  11. rickkkyrich

    rickkkyrich Guest

    like they say .. in and out of love..
  12. alpha1

    alpha1 I BLUES!

  13. rickkkyrich

    rickkkyrich Guest

    Situation is just the opposite of the pic :p:
  14. avi.singh

    avi.singh 6 strings lover

    nice work.. but ..why you kept he/she forever in the dark .. ??
  15. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    maybe to keep her longer,, ?

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