IBTEDA my creation my song

hi guys did this song

a little out tune at some places
but i think i did my best

https://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandid=391965

 

Good work. I liked it.

 

"You need to spread some reputation before repping Mohsin Shahid"

 

nice Mohsin bhai.....Keep it up

 

thanks guys for the appreciation

 

You're a decent guitarist and singer...you need to work on your voice a lot though if you plan to make it big. You definitely have the potential.


The thing about your song is that I thought it lacked creativity. You seem to be next in line after a host of Pakistani bands who've really popularised this genre. Don't get me wrong. I like the song....I think it's pretty cool and if you recorded this in a studio today and put in a decent acoustic lead in the middle and sung it just a little bit better, this song would be a big hit. However, speaking as a musician, I feel this song is no different from a whole lot of others that have recently come in.


All in all, a good job though.

 

Bjr i know there is lack of creativity and the voice is disturbed too
actually that was the first time when i sung my song with my own lyrics so its quite difficult to manage with lyrics and guitar
but i am sure that when i will sing that song twice or thrice i ll get a superb control on my voice

and i forgot to put the solo in the mid of the song and i ll soon gonna put in a final recording

 

of course, it's certainly tougher to sing your own songs. I'm glad you've made a start and hope to see more of your recordings.

 

i am working on new compositions and i hope u ll find it good with no errors !