i want see this poem tunned!

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by reshbal, Sep 6, 2010.

  1. reshbal

    reshbal New Member

    Lonely palm tree waved me in
    Long ago to lovely green
    Plummeted to much scared island,
    Some time it was heavenly,
    otherwise, gone hell with it.

    Every dawn brought in birds,
    Lovely visitors, I love them most.
    Itinerant creatures never stayed,
    every dusk brought me forlorn.

    Freezing water around the land,
    made me prisoner by ruler in me.

    Laying on this dark green grass,
    Gazing into the moonless sky,
    Perhaps I sited ………..
    a star through the waving palm leaves
     
  2. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    nice one... :)
     
  3. nandagopalvenu

    nandagopalvenu New Member

    wow gr8
    i loved it
     
  4. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    i did'nt fully understand the theme. The imagery is good though. I like to do that too.
    Welcome to this place, as dead it may seem. Hope to see more from you.
    :)
     
  5. avi.singh

    avi.singh 6 strings lover

    good imagination...and style...liked it.!!
     
  6. yogiscorp

    yogiscorp New Member

    yea

    kkkkkkk.................................... good 1 ...dude ... keep on trying .. like this ... good
     

Share This Page