I just want to make u smile..

^^that is a poetic genious... :nw:

lol...

 

and again :RollLol: (vishwa, gr8 idea dude, u shud do this more often!)

seems to me ur heading towards ur doom
someday u might not even leave room for ur groom
when to get married you walk down the aisle
I m saying this bcoz..
I just want to make u smile..

:Tongue2:

 

yet again :shock:

oh hon, why r u still crying
my heart aches n so i'm still trying
but all my efforts seem futile
I m saying this bcoz..
I just want to make u smile..

 

here's another 1... now ur poem's PRETTY LONG vishwa

all u do is sleep n laze around
in ur little room u seemed to be bound
some exercise will surely make u more agile
I m saying this bcoz..
I just want to make u smile..

I'd do just ANYTHING except study :shock:

 

and I thought I couldnt write abt something like this in this way... :

 

Oh Crypti.. u r too good.. and too good r ur poetic skills... *salutes the lady* :nw: u r perfect choice for forum lead..

but i want more.. more..


LETS MAKE IGTS LONGEST POEM...


i will also add some more if it comes in my mind..


come on guys.. contribute.. kaisa bhi chalega

 

hey now i add...


Oh honey u look so s.exy..
I know telling this to u is how much risky..
But still i love ur fatty style..
I m saying this becoz...
I just want to make u smile...


Howz that !!!

 

take the stairs instead of the lift
i'll keep sayin thngs till u get the drift
but please dont ever think of me as vile
I m saying this becoz...
I just want to make u smile...

:dance:

 

One more from me...

Go to the gym and give urself some stroke..
I still remember those chairs & my bed that u broke..
I have noted down all those events in my file..
I m saying this becz..
I just want to make u smile...


hows this one :beer:

 

u still look very attractive
a hug right now is what i wanna give
u'd be my perfect companion if i were stranded on an isle
I m saying this becoz...
I just want to make u smile...

:beerbob:

that's it from me... i better go study

 

You say "Entertain me please"
Baby, I'd take you to the movies
But you'd get stuck in the aisle
I m saying this becoz...
I just want to make u smile...

 

^^thats real good..

 

hey Vish gud idea man:RollLol:.........& nice try @ poetry:beer:....I wonder if ther wud b a day when i wud write somethng funny like this...apart from that senti crap i write :shock:

 

try it garry... even i did, u've seen my stuff :shock: totally unlike this...

cpl of the verses i came up with here r kinda funny, not all though... actually... i knew i could write like that, only i was never interested in writing such thngs

 

:shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock:
i guess u were rite Cryptu....here I am with my installment

Honey....try to eat less than what u eat now
May b aftr some time I wud c u & say 'Wow'
U can hv chocolates once in a while
I am saying this cos
I just want to make u smile

:grin: :grin: :grin:
:think: :think: still wondering....its ME who has written these lines ....he he he

 

cooooooool!!

i told ya!

 

ppl...this poem has touched me deep...touched some deep strings ppl...u c ,,the gfs on the fatter side..an now not being close to her..welll...wat can i say...beautiful..phantassimo..
.respect vish..respect crypti..an all other contributors.

 

guess i culd give a try too..i owe her dat much..

 

cmon sweethart i kno ur angry
but if ur hungry u can hav my candy
its not that i want u to thro up bile
I am saying this cos
I just want to make u smile

 

^^^eeeeeeeewwwwwwwwwww.. hbbt:

just perfect :grin: