I just want to make u smile..

IGTs LONGEST POEM

Dear All,

I m trying to write sumthing for the first time... so plz bear with me.. don't go crazy..

hey Crypti tell me how it sounds..


I have written the starting 5 paras.. now wat u people have to do is to add more n more to that..

COME LETS MAKE IGTS LONGEST POEM...


I can see ur eyes r getting wet..
I can also see u r growing fat..
But plz don't cry for a while...
I m saying this bcoz..
I just want to make u smile..


I can see u r now overweight..
U might have gained six, seven or eight..
But believe me ur every kilo has some style..
I m saying this bcoz..
I just want to make u smile..


I can't see u cry..
I know u will give it a try..
Just walk daily.. a km.. yard or a mile..
I m saying this bcoz..
I just want to make u smile..


Oh honey u look so s.exy..
I know telling this to u is how much risky..
But still i love ur fatty style..
I m saying this becoz...
I just want to make u smile...


Go to the gym and give urself some stroke..
I still remember those chairs & my bed that u broke..
I have noted down all those events in my file..
I m saying this becoz..
I just want to make u smile...


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Like all bounties from the East
You're bound to make an excellent feast
For a lion, a tiger or even a crocodile
I'm just saying this because
I want to make you smile

{ ^^^ Verse added by BJR }

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{Verses by Cryptic_Angel starts }

eat right and walk everyday
plz pay heed to what i say
u'll fit into ur old dress in a while
I m saying this bcoz..
I just want to make u smile..


if u dont take care of this now
one day u might end up crying abt how
ur waist size is longer than the river nile
I m saying this bcoz..
I just want to make u smile..


seems to me ur heading towards ur doom
someday u might not even leave room for ur groom
when to get married you walk down the aisle
I m saying this bcoz..
I just want to make u smile..



oh hon, why r u still crying
my heart aches n so i'm still trying
but all my efforts seem futile
I m saying this bcoz..
I just want to make u smile..


all u do is sleep n laze around
in ur little room u seemed to be bound
some exercise will surely make u more agile
I m saying this bcoz..
I just want to make u smile..


u still look very attractive
a hug right now is what i wanna give
u'd be my perfect companion if i were stranded on an isle
I m saying this becoz...
I just want to make u smile...

take the stairs instead of the lift
i'll keep sayin thngs till u get the drift
but please dont ever think of me as vile
I m saying this becoz...
I just want to make u smile...



{ Verse added by Cryptic_angel ends}
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Honey....try to eat less than what u eat now
May b aftr some time I wud c u & say 'Wow'
U can hv chocolates once in a while
I am saying this cos
I just want to make u smile

{^^^ By Garima }

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You say "Entertain me please"
Baby, I'd take you to the movies
But you'd get stuck in the aisle
I m saying this becoz...
I just want to make u smile...

{ ^^^ By BJR }
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cmon sweethart i kno ur angry
but if ur hungry u can hav my candy
its not that i want u to thro up bile
I am saying this cos
I just want to make u smile

{^^^ By Rocksta }

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Come on guys i need more lines.. to make the longest poem of IGT.. :beer:

Hey guys add some more lines to my poem na... Ur lines will be added here..

COME LETS MAKE A POEM



vishwa

 

hahahaha..
thats amazing work..
vintage-vishwa,...
good one!!

 

thanx ansh... oh i posted it in wrong forum BJR gussa mat hona yaar..
shift the thread to poetry n lyrics forum plzzzz

 

Ok..i'll shift it.. bjr's effort saved for now :

nice attempt at poetry!

 

hehe... very in-your-face but yet sweet! lol

good one..

 

wat this in-your-face means :think: * again puzzled*

 

nice work...lol

atleast better than my first attempt :

 

i mean, u r like "u r fat"... that wouldnt be a very flattering thng to say now, would it??

yet, it's a sweet poem

 

WoW !!! sweet poem.. thanx..

but i wud like to open ur eyes... i m not fat :

 

:think:

@cryptu.....dreaming about me :

 

@vishwa

hahaha..i didnt call u fat.. i was jst sayin that in the poem ur basically tellin some1 that they r fat... not u! lol

 

this is again turning out to be like notty,s poem/thread....

 

ok lets see ur poetic skills.. come add some few lines in that...

anyone.. wizzy.. ansh.. vini.. give it a try.. its a small poem.. :

 

man i suck with poetry...:

sm ppl already know it...

let others try

 

ok
here is my addition..

I can see ur eyes r getting wet..
I can also see u r growing fat..
as u r increasing the size of ur hat.... :

i know it sucks!!!

 

^^^ good attempt ansh.. but i want some more lines from where i left.. :

 

haha, awesome.




Other than this, I can imagine a lot of people appreciating your disarming honesty but I doubt that they'd be wanting it when they're crying....perhaps if they were secure about their looks, they might but who on earth is secure about the way they look?



Okay, let's all add to it. Here's my verse(keeping vishwas rhyme scheme):



Like all bounties from the East
You're bound to make an excellent feast
For a lion, a tiger or even a crocodile
I'm just saying this because
I want to make you smile

 

well, i usually wouldnt write this way or abt smthng like this.. but i can give it a try

how abt...

eat right and walk everyday
plz pay heed to what i say
u'll fit into ur old dress in a while
I m saying this bcoz..
I just want to make u smile..

:grin:

(this is supposed to come right after vishwa's lines)

 

Well well thanx.. BJR.. for liking it.. and posting ur verse..

But to be very frank.. i didn't get much from wat u r saying.. like crocodile n all.. but i will add it to my poem..

thanx Crypti.. wow this has the flow of my poem.. added..

 

one more try :grin:

if u dont take care of this now
one day u might end up crying abt how
ur waist size is longer than the river nile
I m saying this bcoz..
I just want to make u smile..

:RollLol: