Gone from vision, A sweet dream inside, Held closely away from prying eyes, A shattered mass. The frozen rainbow, Vanished, Like the air I now hold. Those sparkles, Shining through you, So perfect, Flawless. Or was it a mirage? Did I just imagine it? Disappearing into a black hole. Hidden from me, Hidden from sight, Hidden from the distance inside.
Why did this not get replies? Those sparkles, Shining through you, So perfect, Flawless. Or was it a mirage? I figured this means that you met someone who brought back little girl fairy tale dreams that you lost in disillusionment(the frozen rainbow would be emotional?) somewhere on the way and that would explain the poem in general. I say you should hang on to them. Isn't that what we live for?
hmmm... interesting... seems about "THE" someone special... n i really dont have much comments regarding such stuff... just being honest... lol
I think i know what this poem is about on a realistic level, but i hope i dont. By itself, as a poem, a wonderful, simple and reflective piece of writing.
good selection of words i would say ..i have no clue what these poems mean ..loads of riddling stuff ..
