hi!! plz check out my first recorded song !!

hi peepil !! ive recorded my first song which happens to be " bikhra hoon main " . its recorded using a simple mic of headphone in my hostel. ive uploaded it on w w w . coolgoose . c o m and also on www.rapidshare.de :dance:

-you can download it from coolgoose if u have an id there. just search for the song title "bikhra hoon main" in rock category there and it'll show u the song to download. if u dont have the id i can pm u mine..
- or u can download it from rapidshare. the link is
https://rapidshare.de/files/1650003/bikhra_hoon_main.mp3.html


guys plz give your feedback and rate it.

obviuosly both vocals and guitar by me
:rock:

 

guitar is good....but i guess working more on your vocal will be nice.....anywyzzzz well done....

 

kya gangaram..kya bekar ka gana gayla....thik hai,apun tera gaana download kiya...apna time waste kiya...tere gaane ke saath mandvali kiya...aur tune apunlogo ko aisa chappantikkli gana sunaya......

 

Music is good, but man that voice you got to improve. It seems like you got a good voice, but I think the mic volume and echo wasn't set up properly, cause I seriously could not understand a single word.
Good effort though!!! :beer:

 

nice try man u r better than many of us still everyone needs improvement , so jus improve ur self nice try
clap clap

 

ya as i said im rcording any stuff for the first time. not an expert of the settings. besides i think the headphone mic doesnt take high pitch too well. thats wehre the noise is coming from( trust me its not my throat )
got to sleep ..good morning

 

Yes that was indeed good but you can do better. I suggest you use softwares like soundforge etc next time for the recording.

 

thanks neo ! ill try to get hold of a decent mic first. i used goldwave but didnt know any settings so recorded directly.
any way i can reduce the noise ?

 

hey neo .. i trie to record with a good mike. but strangely its sensitivity is way less as compared to a headphone mic. kept at the same distance, the headphone mic catches almost all the sound but a proper mic hardly catches more than 30-40% of sound. guitar sounds really very faint.
neway if i record the full song with mic, i'll try to upload it too. got any guesses on how to mange the tradeoff

 

good...voice needs sm wrk...but its atleast better than mine