this is real soon..here is my 5th poem..i've just written it in 8-10 minutes..and dont be too startled with the excessive rhyming i've done..coz i have pressed upon total rhyming here.. ******************************************************* HELLWARD HO! Hearken Darkness, you dont scare me Hearken Pain, please just tear me Hearken Despair, never spare me Hearken Satan, just face me and dare me Hearken Blood, want you to smear me Hearken Hell, you did forebear me So i make way to a wayward void Hearken Sin, wont you prepare me? ******************************************************* im not askin in particular for feedback coz i think this poem is too transcendental and abstract to be commented upon :shock: but if u think u can get the feel..then do gimme a feedback
oh i get the feel alright! i totally 'get' it... this one's now my fav frm all ur poems... awesome.. keep it up!
OK..this 1 is surely abstract only 1 reply :shock: and this surely discourages me2 write any further..really hihi
hey can i use these lyrix, they will fit into any metal song perfectly :grin: really as verse now u need to come up with one more as second verse for chorus i can put any horse schit woth growling ... an lo ... u have a metal song ready
thanx everyone! @Jekyll: its gifted 2u for free..but do send me the audio when ur done using these @RD Hearken means listen or give heed..so now u know y u found it a kiddo poem..coz u urself r one . a kiddo..i mean
