He was My World

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by coolgirl_babe, Jun 2, 2005.

  1. coolgirl_babe

    coolgirl_babe ~STOP TRYING TO BE ME~

    He was My World
    My life
    My Everything
    My Best Thing
    I looked in the mirror of his fist print
    Scarring my face and
    Blood streaming from my lip
    My wounded face
    Swollen Swollen
    So badly I couldn't tell who I was
    So I tried to run
    But it kept haunting me
    I tried to run as fast as my feet
    Would carry me
    "If I can't have you, no one will"
    5 Bullets, 5 shots
    5 Bullets tore through my flesh
    Causing me to drop to my knees
    I looked up to see the heavens asking
    God to Save Me
     
    coolgirl_babe, Jun 2, 2005
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  2. LEFTY_GUITARIST

    LEFTY_GUITARIST -= M®. §öU†|-|ÞäW =-

    wow...:grin:................why in dis launge???????
    poetry............????
     
    LEFTY_GUITARIST, Jun 2, 2005
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  3. guitarangela

    guitarangela gran'ma

    isn't this poem too harsh for u.
     
    guitarangela, Jun 2, 2005
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  4. coolgirl_babe

    coolgirl_babe ~STOP TRYING TO BE ME~

    I love writing poems. I hope others like it. It is kinda lame.
     
    coolgirl_babe, Jun 3, 2005
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  5. coolgirl_hotty

    coolgirl_hotty New Member

    Nice poem babe. gud job.
     
    coolgirl_hotty, Jun 3, 2005
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  6. 6string_addict

    6string_addict * Addicted Guitarist * <img src="https://www.india

    coool poem babe......good job...
     
    6string_addict, Jun 3, 2005
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  7. cYpHeR

    cYpHeR Banned

    nice wrk coolgal....
     
    cYpHeR, Jun 3, 2005
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  8. $cReWdR!veR

    $cReWdR!veR .:: Sweetheart ::.

    hey nice poem....
     
    $cReWdR!veR, Jun 3, 2005
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  9. rocking_devil

    rocking_devil Banned


    kinda lame?!very very lame indeed!but gud.
     
    rocking_devil, Jun 21, 2005
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  10. hereafter

    hereafter New Member

    hey, it may be lame but i like it. this is my favourite part:

    "If I can't have you, no one will"
    5 Bullets, 5 shots
    5 Bullets tore through my flesh
    Causing me to drop to my knees
    I looked up to see the heavens asking
    God to Save Me
     
    hereafter, Jun 30, 2005
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  11. GEM_PG

    GEM_PG New Member

    hey
    i guess u r hurt by someone.....if so the best way to timepass for now is to self pity....u ll com out of it...heal ur heart asap
    i say this because - "It takes a minute to like someone, and hour to love someone, but to forget someone takes a life time."

    heal urself asap...

    PG
     
    GEM_PG, Jul 1, 2005
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  12. somendra_guitar

    somendra_guitar New Member

    babe u r gr8
    thats all i have to say
    but plz reply my PM
     
    somendra_guitar, Jul 1, 2005
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  13. lord_neo

    lord_neo Guest

    wow that was pretty good! reps for you... are you sure you are just 15?
     
    lord_neo, Jul 5, 2005
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