i twist and tease and challnge his says i confess i make him a fool when he lays his plans his deeds when the lights are dim do charge him guilty though i have been spying on him Eachother distantly watch feelings combust put it simply he cares and i trust.. ! i dont give a chance for the guy to know this will blast him of if it continues so we share the same satisfaction of lust put it simply he cares and i trust.. ! yes me worthy for him, to down on his knees with a rose in hand, silent lips saying please respect that patience controlling the machos up-thrust to put it simply he cares and i trust..! never herd of his for me what he plans if needs me goota make a advance somehow admire this thoug's not saying first to put it simply he cares and i trust..!
good attempt at expressing whatever ur state of mind was. im not impressed by the words u've used..can be worked upon if u strive for perfection
I disagree with the general theme which, from what I understand, is complete surrender of yourself to someone else. I suppose you could work on clarity.
I should also add that I love the way you write...very different and I love the line "He cares and I trust" even though I disagree with it.
zicky :- thats how i feel... viny Ir garima ..will definatly see from now onwards where else words may come bjr thanks for reading ...we al have our own ways of thingking ..this was me ! .......WHERE ARE THE OTHERS....... ??
i ilke it ...actually its amazing maza aagaya padh ke ... ek baat bataunn i just love this total surrender thing ..if u reaaly feel like this tum meri category ki ho or vice versa bhi chlega...how can i miss this one ! ur style is haat ke ..keep rocking !! reps added
