hate.....

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by astroguru26, May 31, 2007.

  1. astroguru26

    astroguru26 New Member

    the days that were blissfully romantic
    and blessed
    when you were with me
    were now part of history now
    i wish that it could not be the part of my life......


    the dreams that i shared with you
    were now just a dream...
    shattered
    which created the hollowness in my soul
    i wish that those dreams could never be in my life to excite me.....


    the passion that
    were ignited with two souls
    make my heart bleed and burn now...
    the commitments went off as candle in the fierce windy night
    in a single moment...
    i wish that i was not broken badly the moment i am now...



    the way we admired
    the way we adored ...
    and passing thorugh the hell without you,
    sometimes feels unsettling and unnerving...
    the untold truth
    that i cannot share now with anyone
    wish i cud hate you the way i loved you....

    but before to throw the poison of hate on you,
    to curse you for all the pain and sufferings of my life....
    wish i cud have that
    much of hate filled in my soul to throw on you...
    wish
    i cud have that power to hate you...
    wish i cud have...
    wish i cud have.....



    rohit
     
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  2. i'm_not_neo

    i'm_not_neo el valor máximo absoluto

    Nice one..though it doesn't precisely portray what happened,your pain is well described..

    Gonna rep you for this line:
    wish i cud hate you the way i loved you....
     
  3. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    wish i cud hate you the way i loved you....
    this shud have been
    wish i cud hate you ..( a word which means intensity) i loved you....
    i.e he wished he culd hate her with the same intensity with which he loved her !
     
  4. i'm_not_neo

    i'm_not_neo el valor máximo absoluto

    ^^yeah but he nearly achieved the same impact..
     
  5. ~Bish

    ~Bish The Illusionist

    a poem after a long time rohit..

    the person u hate most is always the person whom u loved most..

    good one..
     

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