Happy Birthday (Dark Version)

Hi all,
This is an attempt at altering the original happy birthday tune.
Comments would be really appreciated.

https://soundclick.com/share?songid=8148920

enjoy

 

Cool Dude! I liked it. Nice improvisation!

 

well done mate!! i must!! impressive!!

 

Hey, I cant listen to any of songs on Sound click. It says, "ERROR LOADING SONG FILE."
I even cant hear my own songs from Soundclick... HELP ME
Just tried this song too, but cant...