Ppl who r regular to my threads in Poetry Forum wud kno that its a sad poam...no need to mention. : Some1 rightly said...'sad poet' thats me:grin: y me happy....some1 atleast agreed that m a poet...& sad part can change to happy anytime...lifez not the same always... Ab toh ujala bhi paraya lagta hai Jab se ham andhere ke agosh me kho gaye hain Itne zakhm khaye hain is dil ne Ki ab toh har dushman apna sa lagta hai Ab toh har dost paraya lagta hai Jab se dushmano se atoot rishte bandh gaye hain Itne dukh dekhe hain is dil ne Ki ab toh har gam pyara sa lagta hai Ab toh sari khushiya parayi lagti hain Jab se gam is zindgi ke mehmaan huye hain Itne rang khoye hain is zindgi se hamne Ki ab toh zindgi berang hi achhi lagti hai Ab toh har lamha, har katra, har ummeed parayi lagti hai Jab se is hamara saaya hamse rootha hua hai Hamein ye duniya parayi si lagti hai Waiting for the comments...
great one. Kudos...a nice kavita indeed....can imagine u typing while headset on and irate cons on other side...but is parayi duniya main there are few guys who are ready to accept to for who u r. u just need to give a chance to them.it often happen that we give chance to wrong people and and then we have our own perspective for everyone.... Must say a nice effort and a lovely thought.
WOWWWw!!!! excellent! u rock gurl! well... i can say one thing for sure that u r a AWESOME POETESS! u better take this talent of urs seriously gurl... thats my advice!
tu is parayi duniya main kayko itne TRAGIC MODE main jee reli hain.............humko bhi rona aa gaya.....apnon ki duniya main wapas aao............
garry's new poem .. get a tissue before opening the thread ... i dont know how you do this .. but believe me girl ... you make your voice heard every time!! very nicely written .. *hug*
@Pamposh....thanks. @Apurba : sholly....dont cry na pls. :grin: @Trish...:grin: @Hira....the point is that no1 tk me seriously : @Abhi....lol..m bk man...wud prove with my nxt poem..it wont b tragic one...pakka...<for a change> @Shak...nxt time i wud mk sure that no1 require a tissue thanks *HUG* bada wala :grin:
@garima .. Tumhe yeh duniya parayi si lagti hai .. Ek pal ka bichadna judaai si lagti hai .. Aapko pyaar karne ki aisi aadat si ho gayi.. ki aapke sitam bhi ab hume duhaai si lagti hai Especially wrote for u .. i'l pm u da reason y .. great goin bud ..
hmmm....kya baat hain.......pm me also..... : : hehehe.........but good one jo likha hain.........** still thinking ...............still thinking **
